Sun Shadows

shades of light and dark
far across the icy fields....
glinting sun shadows









* for Strict Haiku 2 Contest
sponsored by Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Laan Avatar
January 7, 2011 at 4:26 AM
Deb, I love watching the sun shadows across the fields or beach or anywhere, life is all about light and dark shadows, beautiful haiku here.
Docherty Avatar
January 5, 2011 at 12:37 AM
Beautiful glimpse fo nature shared in great haiku form. Thanks for your welcome comments, and all the best for 2011...
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January 4, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Nice use of imagery to share your thoughts. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
Anderson Avatar
January 4, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Hey Deb! Thanks for the kind comments on my poems..means a whole lot to me! Best of luck in the contest! ......Jimmy
Neels Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 11:07 AM
Breathtaking haiku Deb.. Good luck for Charles's contest, love Wilma
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January 3, 2011 at 5:01 AM
Excellent Haiku Deb... wishing you all the best in the contest....with luv Michael
Brown Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 5:01 AM
What a way to start out my New Year reading such exceptional poetry. Thank you for starting the new year out with us sharing your wonderful poetry Deb. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 5:39 PM
Nice entry to the contest with aptr images to create the picture of sdun shadows, Deb
Haick Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Breathtaking beauty, Deb! Will do very well in the contest, I'm sure! A very Happy New Year to you, girl! Love, Audrey
Belt Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 2:45 PM
Great Haiku Deb....Good Luck in the contest......Larry
Duffin Avatar
January 2, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Hi Deb. Thanks for your visit. Great descriptive write. Strange how you can see further when the sun shines on snow. Have luck with this excellent read/write. Eamon
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