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Sun Saturated Storm...

sun soaked green tree leaves and storm stained skies of twighlight with a fading rain

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2009 4:28:00 AM

Very expressive and descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Laurie Ginn

Date: 7/29/2009 10:18:00 PM

First of all --YIPEEE glad to see you putting the pen to paper. We've had a very rainy week and for lack of a better way to describe it, it makes the world seem softer or gentler. I know it only makes sense to me but the beauty of the multi colored grays and navy blues, the sound of rain dripping or stinging the ground and the rumbles of thunder. The storm stained sky, what a story in four words.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/29/2009 7:46:00 PM

something we are in sore need of here in Minnesota right now!! Luke! nice haiku!! jim