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Sun Saturated Storm...

sun soaked green tree leaves

and storm stained skies of twighlight

with a fading rain

naturehaiku

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Sara Kendrick

August 5, 2009 at 4:28 AM

Very expressive and descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Laurie Ginn

July 29, 2009 at 10:18 PM

First of all --YIPEEE glad to see you putting the pen to paper. We've had a very rainy week and for lack of a better way to describe it, it makes the world seem softer or gentler. I know it only makes sense to me but the beauty of the multi colored grays and navy blues, the sound of rain dripping or stinging the ground and the rumbles of thunder. The storm stained sky, what a story in four words.