Sun Rotation But No Sun Rise

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Life, like the sun, doesn't reverse itself. Hold on to the shards for dear life.

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Alexis Y.

Date: 8/5/2021 8:13:00 AM

Hi Lasaad, There is much depth to your wise one-liner-Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/5/2021 8:34:00 AM

Thanks Alexis appreciate you kind words

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/4/2021 5:27:00 AM

Feeling fragile these days. I am holding on for dear life...Delice

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/5/2021 8:34:00 AM

I wish for you happy and long life Delice, appreciate your comment

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/4/2021 2:25:00 AM

The prophecy is that someday it will fall on us. Pray to the Almighty.

Sotto Poet
Date: 8/5/2021 8:33:00 AM

Thanks for your prayers Victor, your wonderful words are so touching