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Sun Rise Or Sun Set

The passing breeze whispers through my hair. The temperature slowly cools and leaves a chill in the air. I sit, feet dangling over this over pass and stare out at city lights. I love to watch the sunset dissipate at dusk, the colors mix with orange and whites. The birds faintly glide through the shadows as I sit in bliss. it amazes me that the sky can be such a great artist, or that any of this exists. By: Roxanna Johnson

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/28/2011 5:15:00 PM

Great one..Congratulations...Sara

John Freeman

Date: 5/26/2011 6:56:00 PM

Roxanna, a pleasure to see your poem's recognition. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 5/26/2011 1:00:00 PM

Many congrats Roxanna....:)

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 5/26/2011 3:53:00 AM

Many congrats Roxxana on HM win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/25/2011 6:41:00 PM

Congrats Roxanna on your HM in HG's contest with this vibrant entry luv.. enjoy..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/25/2011 3:35:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG, Roxanna

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 11:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Roxanna. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2011 5:07:00 PM

Since I was a baby, my parents could not get me to sleep before ten. It's impossible. My body just wants to be up with the night owls! And I am very creative then too. I feel like death warmed over to waken before 6 a.m. Age seems to be changing me. I don't need as much sleep anymore. You are just someone that really needs your sleep. When I am not interrupted by hubbie always getting up early for work during my sleep, I seem to prefer six or seven hours naturally!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2011 5:06:00 PM

you did a wonderful job with this short descriptive poem. Just the kind I love to read. I enjoyed reading your comments on my blog. Since I was a baby, my parents could not get me to sleep before ten. It's impossible. I have to continue this message to next box.

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/27/2011 12:56:00 PM

Very nice Roxanna...good luck in the contest....Jimmy

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 4/27/2011 5:38:00 AM

Thanks so much for letting me know (:

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/27/2011 5:30:00 AM

Dear Roxanna, Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest "Sunrise - Verses - Sunsets" Please put YOUR Name on YOUR Entree to be moved to Round 2, LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege...HG

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 4/26/2011 5:10:00 PM

I said sit but thanks....

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 4/26/2011 6:04:00 AM

"I set" or I sit? It's a lovely read. The end really captures the amazement of life. I hope you have entered this in the contest.