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Sun Penetrates

Sun penetrates icicles drip
Morn's sun melts sandy snow
Moored to the shore with ropes sturdy
Trapped in a boat no go

Icicles drop cold liquid like tears
Shed for life's soon parting
What will the eaves do for diamonds
When gems have departed

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/5/2014 9:47:00 PM

The cold can make us miserable, sometimes. Though, I do feel a sadness when the beautiful snow begins to melt away. Very nice imagery in this poem. Well done, Sara!...Thank you very much for the kind comments. I always appreciate your visits.

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/5/2014 4:40:00 PM

Enjoyed the theme here Sara, very good images you convey..!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/5/2014 7:26:00 AM

dream like quality to this Sara lovely picture left in the mind great pen hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2014 4:50:00 AM

- Great imagery - beautiful poem Sara !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/2/2014 12:32:00 PM

P.S.how did you like the snow? Funny you should write about it. But yes down there they will soon depart while ours will linger.

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/2/2014 12:22:00 PM

Hey, Sara Marie, I was just going through a list of names and having a good time when one of your comments said it was in the bible. Then I remembered. It seems so ironic that at this time something strange would remind me that your middle name is Marie. Anyway it was just a thought.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/2/2014 12:22:00 PM

Hi Sara: I loved the two last lines. You almost wish Winter came again.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/2/2014 10:15:00 AM

love this one, Sara - I could clearly see that melting ice and snow

Christine Phillips

Date: 2/2/2014 9:01:00 AM

"Icicles drop cold liquid like tears". Nice poem. A beautiful line. I like the strong metaphoric expression that is used in this poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2014 10:37:00 PM

what a fantastic line: what will the eaves do for diamonds!!! Great creativity, Sara.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/31/2014 5:53:00 PM

Another glorious write this one truly is my friend! I surely loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! I hope we get a thaw here soon, we have been in a deep freeze for a long time now, just today got above freezing for the first time in a long time! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!