Sun On Brick

line against the wall
fat birds too wrung out to drive
later, rooms' sweet ease
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 11:57 PM
another one with very interesting images. Love that last line!
Miers Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 5:10 PM
thank you.
Mehta Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Nicely done haiku, Michael
Miers Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 5:11 PM
thank you, too.
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