Home » Poems » Erich Goller » Sun Kissed

Sun Kissed

Sun Kissed (Haiku) sun kissed fields of grain with scattered seeds of blessing worlds greatest riches Erich J,Goller Copyright 7 20.2012 Contest: Haiku Challenge

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Daver Austin

Date: 7/24/2012 3:39:00 PM

Sounds wonderful. Here in Michigan we need some water for our sun kissed fields. daver

Erich Goller
Date: 7/24/2012 3:52:00 PM

thank you very much Daver, the rain will come.Hugs!Erich

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/24/2012 12:53:00 PM

Good use of this short form. You stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Erich Goller
Date: 7/24/2012 1:46:00 PM

thank you very much Matthew,I'm glad you liked the poem.Erich

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/22/2012 5:27:00 PM

Great haiku, Erich...very effective alliteration as well...good luck in the contest - Tim

Erich Goller
Date: 7/22/2012 8:43:00 PM

thank you very much Tim, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,Erich.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/22/2012 4:01:00 PM

very lovely! good luck in the contest!

Erich Goller
Date: 7/22/2012 4:45:00 PM

thank you very much Ilene,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/22/2012 3:22:00 PM

First class haiku, Erich - Wish you luck in contest, hope for a win for you. - Have a lovely new week. - oxox Anne-Lise

Erich Goller
Date: 7/22/2012 3:31:00 PM

thank you very much Anne Lise for your hearfelt words. Hugs!Erich