Sun Kissed

Sun Kissed (Haiku) sun kissed fields of grain with scattered seeds of blessing worlds greatest riches Erich J,Goller Copyright 7 20.2012
Contest: Haiku Challenge
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Austin Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 3:39 PM
Sounds wonderful. Here in Michigan we need some water for our sun kissed fields. daver
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July 24, 2012 at 3:52 PM
thank you very much Daver, the rain will come.Hugs!Erich
Anish Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Good use of this short form. You stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is all to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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July 24, 2012 at 1:46 PM
thank you very much Matthew,I'm glad you liked the poem.Erich
Ryerson Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 5:27 PM
Great haiku, Erich...very effective alliteration as well...good luck in the contest - Tim
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July 22, 2012 at 8:43 PM
thank you very much Tim, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,Erich.
Bauer Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 4:01 PM
very lovely! good luck in the contest!
Goller Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 4:45 PM
thank you very much Ilene,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Hugs!Erich
Andresen Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 3:22 PM
First class haiku, Erich - Wish you luck in contest, hope for a win for you. - Have a lovely new week. - oxox Anne-Lise
Goller Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 3:31 PM
thank you very much Anne Lise for your hearfelt words. Hugs!Erich
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