Sun Kiss

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SUN KISS

FROM SARONIDA, GREECE, YESTERDAY, PHOTO TAKEN BY ME, ©

The anxious bright sun lifted the veil of the dark clouds and placed a kiss upon the placid sea! © Demetrios Trifiatis 13 February 2017 5-7-5

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Date: 2/13/2017 7:21:00 PM

A serene 7 xomo

Date: 2/13/2017 8:22:00 AM

In amazement we see ... the kissing spree ... and the poet's dexterity ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/13/2017 2:21:00 PM

You so kind and generous my friend, Probir, thank you!

Date: 2/13/2017 6:32:00 AM

Stunning...One of my favorite pieces.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/13/2017 2:21:00 PM

Thank you, Tim, my friend, so good to see you!

Date: 2/13/2017 3:15:00 AM

- Beautiful written to this fabulous picture, my friend - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/13/2017 5:44:00 AM

Thank you that you like the picture as well as the poem my dear, Anne-Lise! Hugs