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Sun Kiss

mother flower sways
dispersing seeds in the air
her children leave home

dormant in their sleep
tomorrows generation
awaits suns warm kiss


      16.09.21
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Cunningham Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 5:30 AM
Love the imagery Emilia, well written haiku. Tom
James Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 2:22 PM
Thank you so much Tom. Think I am understanding them a bit better now. Emilia : )
Conn Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 4:16 PM
Nice. The first one's a heavyweight contest contender.
James Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 4:38 AM
Thank you Chris, I keep trying to improve with this form. Emilia : )
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