Sun Is Every Where Where Ever We See

when the rivers flow all along 
sun comes to meet it 
when mountains are all around 
sun comes to shine it 
when red roses grow all around 
sun comes to warm it 
when skies are dark 
sun comes to bright it 
when we are having a sleep 
sun comes to wake us 
sun can change day to night   night to day 
sun is every where where ever we see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Toran Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Brilliantly written!...Milt
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November 23, 2013 at 1:48 AM
Hello Stuti , welcome to Poetry Soup !! A nice start on Poetry Soup with writing a lovely poem on a beautiful topic !! Hugs and smiles .....xoxo~ Saanvi : )
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November 19, 2013 at 11:10 PM
Stuti, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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November 20, 2013 at 12:10 PM
THANK YOU I AM 10 YEARS OLD GIRL MY NAME IS STUTI BHATT I STUDY IN INDIAN HIGH SCHOOL DUBAI I AM IN GRADE 6F
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November 18, 2013 at 11:18 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Stuti! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
Bhatt Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 12:10 PM
THANK YOU I AM 10 YEARS OLD GIRL MY NAME IS STUTI BHATT I STUDY IN INDIAN HIGH SCHOOL DUBAI I AM IN GRADE 6F
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November 18, 2013 at 10:47 AM
Stuti, I love the sun.... I like your first poetic piece on the site , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Bhatt Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 12:11 PM
THANK YOU I AM 10 YEARS OLD GIRL MY NAME IS STUTI BHATT I STUDY IN INDIAN HIGH SCHOOL DUBAI I AM IN GRADE 6F
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November 18, 2013 at 10:24 AM
Enoyed reading your creative work..Sara
Bhatt Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 12:11 PM
THANK YOU I AM 10 YEARS OLD GIRL MY NAME IS STUTI BHATT I STUDY IN INDIAN HIGH SCHOOL DUBAI I AM IN GRADE 6F
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