Sun God

The darkness crumbles,
Bowing in divine presence:
Of the mighty sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mossburg Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 1:18 PM
This is very descriptive and I enjoyed reading it. It is amazing how vivid and potent a few words can be. Thanks for sharing it and thanks, too, for commenting on my mine.
Richards Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 7:32 AM
I love this Raul! This is one of your BEST !!!!
Clark Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 5:27 AM
Strong image Raul, nicely framed! Love Jralynn
Chircop Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 3:10 AM
powerful is the light of the mighty sun against evil's darkness.Powerful haiku,Raul.-Charma.
Strand Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 2:57 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment today.Rgds Brian
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