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Sun God

The darkness crumbles, Bowing in divine presence: Of the mighty sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/17/2010 1:18:00 PM
This is very descriptive and I enjoyed reading it. It is amazing how vivid and potent a few words can be. Thanks for sharing it and thanks, too, for commenting on my mine.
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Date: 3/16/2010 7:32:00 AM
I love this Raul! This is one of your BEST !!!!
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Date: 3/16/2010 5:27:00 AM
Strong image Raul, nicely framed! Love Jralynn
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Date: 3/16/2010 3:10:00 AM
powerful is the light of the mighty sun against evil's darkness.Powerful haiku,Raul.-Charma.
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Date: 3/16/2010 2:57:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comment today.Rgds Brian
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