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Sun Dancing

In the blush of sunlight, our flames become a lacquered glow of orb we grasp its shine to frolic in morn's bliss, hands coil as one. In the blush of sunlight, our flames become like promenading rays on winds that hum until twin shadows glide a dance divine. In the blush of sunlight, our flames become a lacquered glow of orb we grasp its shine!
One in Five: For Beauty Strive Contest Hosted by Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/11/2014 7:05:00 PM
nice win. ~ Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 1/19/2014 3:07:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 1/14/2014 12:39:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful dear Nette.
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Date: 1/12/2014 6:11:00 PM
Great use of the form & the internal verse is pleasant also. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/12/2014 4:11:00 PM
Oh nette....how lovely is this and I now see the hidden phrase..so wonderful...congratulations..
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Date: 1/12/2014 11:32:00 AM
I got to enjoy reading this again. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/12/2014 10:33:00 AM
I love the poem and the poem within the poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/12/2014 12:48:00 AM
Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, nette
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Date: 1/11/2014 9:31:00 PM
Hey, Nette, this was beautiful as ever. Just wish you'd put a few commas maybe to separate the phrases in a few places. Other than that, it was flawless! Congrats for your win.
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Date: 1/1/2014 9:26:00 PM
I adore the sunrises and sunsets, so this title drew me in... this is every bit as gorgeous as the most beautiful of sunsets Nette,,, very wonderfully crafted Triolet! Hugs
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Date: 1/1/2014 10:14:00 AM
Beautifully woven write Nette. Impressive descriptive energy.
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Date: 12/31/2013 12:57:00 PM
Beautiful Nette!Happy New Year to you!
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Date: 12/31/2013 9:23:00 AM
you sure are an amazing poet nette,,this is in blush of grace, that upon which you are having bared your soul here on soup,, to enchant us all/// happy new year to you...
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Date: 12/30/2013 5:01:00 PM
The true sense of two souls engrossed with passion ! Lovely write dear poet ! Have a blessed New Year Nette ! Much Love,james
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Date: 12/30/2013 11:08:00 AM
- Nette my friend ..... you always write from your soul .... always sharing your beautiful thoughts and words .... Always give consideration and a huggs ... - Beautifully written! - Wish you all the best - Want to thank you for a lovely friendship and a enjoyable year, as soon be at an end .... many beautiful poems from you! - I wish you: A HAPPY NEW YEAR!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/30/2013 9:41:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem Nette, I really liked this one...Hugs...Roger
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Date: 12/30/2013 8:22:00 AM
Enjoyed this beauty of a poem, nette
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Date: 12/30/2013 7:08:00 AM
Love that time of day when the sun seems to blush in beautiful colors... this is a beautiful dance of love to me... superb writing !!
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Date: 12/30/2013 5:41:00 AM
Very passionate work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/30/2013 12:52:00 AM
You wrote a splendid poem my very dear friend Nette! I love your poem so much. Sunshine is my favorite & I'm also thinking of trying this form w/ the same topic. Hope I can do it soon. My short vacation has finally started. By the way, are you still in Hongkong dearest friend? Hope you enjoyed your trip there! Biggest hugs to u! take care! TYSM for stopping by at my Christmas Greetings Blog. If you've time, pls. read my reply. TYSM for everything! Happy New Year 2014! love lots & hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/30/2013 12:51:00 AM
Got the style, got the rhythm. This sways from gentle to bouncing beats. Rare gift you have!
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Date: 12/29/2013 11:51:00 PM
You have painted a very illustrious and beautiful vision with this awesome write here my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, such a fascinating poem Nette! You have mastered many forms, and this one is so very perfectly written, Great Work!! I want to wish you a very Happy New Year, may 2014 be everything you want it to be!!
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Date: 12/29/2013 11:22:00 PM
Just beautiful as always Nette! luv,Deb
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