Sun Dancing

Ray of light in morn
specks of dust just carry on
care free sun dancing

dancesunhaiku

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Skat A

February 11, 2014 at 7:44 PM

Afroze, congratulations. ~ Love ~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

January 19, 2014 at 3:13 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Afroze Ali

January 20, 2014 at 9:43 AM

Thanks for reading my haiku and thanks for the appreciation too!

Donna Jones

January 12, 2014 at 5:00 PM

That's exactly what it looks like....awesome description..congratulations...

Afroze Ali

January 20, 2014 at 9:44 AM

Thanks Donna.

Richard Lamoureux

January 12, 2014 at 10:57 AM

Nothing like dancing and feeling the sun on your skin. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 12, 2014 at 1:10 AM

Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Afroze

Afroze Ali

January 20, 2014 at 9:42 AM

Thank you so much Dr. Ram

Andrea Dietrich

January 11, 2014 at 9:41 PM

So good to see you on my list, Afroze. I liked the little picture this gave me of the dancing dust particles. Congrats for your win.

Afroze Ali

January 20, 2014 at 9:42 AM

Thanks Andrea, I am glad you liked it.

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