Sun Dancing

Ray of light in morn specks of dust just carry on care free sun dancing

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Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 7:44:00 PM

Afroze, congratulations. ~ Love ~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2014 3:13:00 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Afroze Ali
Date: 1/20/2014 9:43:00 AM

Thanks for reading my haiku and thanks for the appreciation too!

Donna Jones

Date: 1/12/2014 5:00:00 PM

That's exactly what it looks like....awesome description..congratulations...

Afroze Ali
Date: 1/20/2014 9:44:00 AM

Thanks Donna.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2014 10:57:00 AM

Nothing like dancing and feeling the sun on your skin. Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2014 1:10:00 AM

Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Afroze

Afroze Ali
Date: 1/20/2014 9:42:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr. Ram

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:41:00 PM

So good to see you on my list, Afroze. I liked the little picture this gave me of the dancing dust particles. Congrats for your win.

Afroze Ali
Date: 1/20/2014 9:42:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I am glad you liked it.