Sun Dance

Oh little motes of dust
Dancing in the sun
How merrily you chase
Until the day is done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loveless Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 6:34 AM
Ahh i love this ^^ ....ive had my own thoughts about these little dancing dust particles...funny thing is, ive always thought them dancing too. ~rain
Foster Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 6:49 PM
They do look happy don't they, til they settle on the furniture....Nice smiley one....thank you for your kind remarks today......Margaret
Smith Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 8:48 AM
wow this is great makes me smile when i read it this is a great happy poem, and it brightened my boring work day!=)Jo
Zakerski Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 5:15 AM
Great job Nick! Thank you for your kind words as well! Have a great day. Kelly
Palli Avatar
February 17, 2010 at 2:29 AM
Loved it! thanks
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