Sun Dance

Oh little motes of dust
Dancing in the sun
How merrily you chase
Until the day is done

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Jay Loveless

Date: 5/19/2010 6:34:00 AM

Ahh i love this ^^ ....ive had my own thoughts about these little dancing dust particles...funny thing is, ive always thought them dancing too. ~rain

Margaret Foster

Date: 2/19/2010 6:49:00 PM

They do look happy don't they, til they settle on the furniture....Nice smiley one....thank you for your kind remarks today......Margaret

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/18/2010 8:48:00 AM

wow this is great makes me smile when i read it this is a great happy poem, and it brightened my boring work day!=)Jo

Kelly Zakerski

Date: 2/17/2010 5:15:00 AM

Great job Nick! Thank you for your kind words as well! Have a great day. Kelly

Susan Palli

Date: 2/17/2010 2:29:00 AM

Loved it! thanks