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Sun Brakes the Horizon

rooster wakes the dawn
sound of hens fluttering wings
tender grass springs out 
 


 4/25/2020


Poetry Contest: Morning Praise 
Sponsored by: Raul Moreno

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D.W. Rodgers

May 2, 2020 at 5:27 PM

Well done, a sensual cornecopia. Conrats on your win.

Sandra Adams

April 30, 2020 at 8:36 PM

just stopping back to say congratulations! hugs :)

Kai Michael Neumann

April 30, 2020 at 6:26 AM

Congratulation ...

Susan Ashley

April 29, 2020 at 8:42 PM

Returning with congratulations for a wonderful win, Eve. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Jan Allison

April 29, 2020 at 4:53 PM

A lovely haiku Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

April 26, 2020 at 10:17 PM

Beautiful eve

Connie Marcum Wong

April 26, 2020 at 10:03 PM

This haiku is lovely Eve. It is sure to please! Blessings xxoo

Susan Ashley

April 26, 2020 at 9:55 PM

Beautifully done, Eve. Vivid imagery fresh as the new day. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Caren Krutsinger

April 26, 2020 at 9:29 PM

I am wakened every morn by the neighbors roosters. Nothing better. Glad you know this joy too Eve.

John Watt

April 26, 2020 at 5:03 PM

I can almost smell the hay. Nice haiku, Eve - good luck in the contest. Hugs ~ John

Jenish Somadas

April 26, 2020 at 9:54 AM

Lovely imagery.. Great write Eve..Good luck..

Ts Poetry

April 26, 2020 at 9:46 AM

Lovely image Eve...can't wait to read your book...arriving on Tuesday :))

Arturo Michael

April 26, 2020 at 8:49 AM

I can can see the grass poking out of the ground...and that macho rooster proclaiming this day will be his day...Nice one

Sandra Adams

April 25, 2020 at 11:45 PM

nicely done...I just wrote one for this contest and tried to fit all the images in, maybe I should have concentrated on one, I love the picture he gave and love the haiku you came up with... hugs

Sun Brakes the Horizon

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