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9/22/2025 for 1415 WHAT YOU WILL Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

 

Sun and Slowpoke

As the sun arcs from East to West, 
a snail embarks upon his quest - 
a shining orb flies through the air, 
a slowpoke goes from here to there.
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Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 10:02 PM
Thanks for the giggle. I came specifically looking for one.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 4:43 PM
now aren't you the clever poet! :-) best wishes with this contest entry
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