Sun and Sky

sun and sky shine one
tears I cry joy embracing
gently caressing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 2:10 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Lucinda :) - I choose your first good written haiku poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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April 29, 2014 at 2:35 PM
Lucinda, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Allison Avatar
April 26, 2014 at 7:46 AM
Beautiful Haiku. Hugs Jan x
A   Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 11:20 PM
Hi Lucinda, a wonderful, haiku.... XOX~ Linda
Devonshire Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 1:03 PM
I know what you mean about the sun and sky appearing to shine as one and the joy you feel being part of this magical universe. Very nice haiku, Cindy! I am on the road but glad I had a chance to stop by and read your poem. Missed you! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Great Haiku that I enjoyed reading ....Glad that I chose this one to read today..Your kind comments on my work are greatly appreciated..Sara
Neels Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Cindy I enjoyed reading your beautiful haiku tonight.. :) Wilma
Palli Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 12:24 PM
nice one!
Esquire Avatar
September 7, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Dear Cindy, a Masterly written Haiku I thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM "Gnawing and Gnashing of Teeth" I hope YOU read more of this POEM as I continue It YOUR Liege Always...HG
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