Mohan Chutani Poet Rhyme

Sun and Sand Minichu

far from wintry England
into caressing warmth of a tropical beach 
sun and sand

fun and frolick
in a lazy temperate breach
uptick

recoup
recharge, wild peach
sloop

far from wintry England
in a lazy temperate breach
sloop

4.1.2021

Note:
Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows:
1. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 
3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of  stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.
4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.
5. Syllable count : 
Stanza 1: 6,12,3 
Stanza 2: 4,8,2
Stanza 3: 2,4,1
Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

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David Crandall September 18, 2024 at 9:32 AM I'm there! Sounds great Mohan! Mohan Chutani March 20, 2026 at 10:13 PM Hv fun.

Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 23, 2021 at 12:27 AM Ok don't have to soup mail me Thanks for directions. Mohan Chutani March 20, 2026 at 10:14 PM Ok. You are welcome.

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2021 at 1:14 PM Hey, I love how you did your very own sun and sand one!!! thanks for that contest, Mohan. Mohan Chutani March 20, 2026 at 10:14 PM Thanks Andrea.

Sara Kendrick February 3, 2021 at 7:34 AM Your description of the warm and sunny beach reads like you have been there before. Thanks for dropping back by my poem to tell me you liked the change. I do not expect you to change my placement in the contest. I just wanted to make the poem correct but I could have used the term poetic license in what I wrote. Sara Mohan Chutani March 20, 2026 at 10:16 PM Sure.

Eve Roper January 10, 2021 at 9:21 PM Thank you, Mohan, I was totally confused with the form and this helps. I will give it a try. Hugs Eve Mohan Chutani March 20, 2026 at 10:13 PM Eve, Thanks for your appreciation.

Jan Allison January 7, 2021 at 4:53 AM thanks for the inspiration , it seems a challenging form I will try and write for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Mohan Chutani January 9, 2021 at 6:03 AM Most welcome Jan. A happy new year to you. Best. Mohan