Sun

Long rays beaming down
warm my face and surround me
with warmth all around

africacourageearth daywordhaiku

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Tim Smith

May 20, 2016 at 9:48 AM

Have you heard the song with the same name as you from Englands representative in the. Eurovision competition?

Skat A

May 15, 2016 at 12:50 PM

your haiku are the best, you ShOuld write more of them. I feel you are very SkilleD. :) one Of The best at drawing up haiku. dO you have them published soMe where. I'd like to look you up on Amazon and read your haiku bOOk if you have ONE. Have A Nice Day ~SKAT~

Lenny Gazbowski

May 11, 2016 at 1:49 PM

Ah, the Sun - the Light of the world. These three lines reminded me of the warmth the Sun gives us. Nice haiku, and hello ! I think this is the first time I've come across your poetry.

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