Sun

A sunny day it was today,
makes a change
from being grey.
Last week
nothing but rain,
great to see the sun again!
Hope tomorrow's just as good.
Let's have a summer,
like we should!
Like it was years ago,
summer sun
and winter snow.
Living here,
it's mostly cold.
I will move,
when I get old.
Anywhere with sun will do.
The south of France
or Timbouctou.
Stick me in the oven
until I'm done.
C'mon nature
bring on the sun!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 4, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Got to disagree on this one, I am not a fan of the tremendous heat, ugh! I love cool days, overcast is okay. I lived in Germany for a while so I know what it's like not to see the sun for some time. I didn't mind -it made those rare sunny days special, which is why I like this poem :) MC
Newman Avatar
July 29, 2013 at 7:56 AM
Nicely done a light hearted poem a joy to read,,, imagery great and great flow and rhythm,,, well done, blessings sueellen11
Marszalowicz Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 2:05 PM
Is there room in the oven for me? If cold and old are states of mind I've been a geezer for years!
May Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 6:17 AM
nicely penned Jenny....I enjoted the read
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