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A sunny day it was today, makes a change from being grey. Last week nothing but rain, great to see the sun again! Hope tomorrow's just as good. Let's have a summer, like we should! Like it was years ago, summer sun and winter snow. Living here, it's mostly cold. I will move, when I get old. Anywhere with sun will do. The south of France or Timbouctou. Stick me in the oven until I'm done. C'mon nature bring on the sun!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/4/2013 8:06:00 PM
Got to disagree on this one, I am not a fan of the tremendous heat, ugh! I love cool days, overcast is okay. I lived in Germany for a while so I know what it's like not to see the sun for some time. I didn't mind -it made those rare sunny days special, which is why I like this poem :) MC
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Date: 7/29/2013 7:56:00 AM
Nicely done a light hearted poem a joy to read,,, imagery great and great flow and rhythm,,, well done, blessings sueellen11
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Date: 7/28/2013 2:05:00 PM
Is there room in the oven for me? If cold and old are states of mind I've been a geezer for years!
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Date: 7/28/2013 6:17:00 AM
nicely penned Jenny....I enjoted the read
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