Sun

a serene light entered the room 
I'd catered to the empty brass chalice 
near the crowded foyer the light guided me 

beyond my self consciousness fondly I'd awaited 
a sultry vibe in an instant a brilliant groove 
bestowed the untimely hue approaching my senses 

while this light moved forward dancing daintily 
between solace and mirth suddenly the light began to 
release an enriching glow that consumed me 

like a garment of warmth tenderly I sighed 
craving the mere brightness of a sullen calm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
Harvey Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 8:25 AM
A poem that readily grasps its' reader. "enriching glow...is quite nice. Very nice. Thx, Jan
Lu Avatar
February 17, 2012 at 7:57 AM
packed with imagery, nice work! Cindy
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