Sun

Gives me a sunburn
                                           
                                           Bleaches my curly red hair
                                              
                                             Makes me nice and tan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Baity Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 8:08 AM
Nice Haiku Patrick!!!
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July 23, 2011 at 9:53 PM
Nice one Smith I enjoyed reading your poem so have a nice day
Johnson Avatar
July 21, 2011 at 12:47 PM
nice (: thanks for the comment on my poem, much appreciated.
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