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SUN our star source of life gold crimson glory rivers ripple its rays birds beast trees happily cheer “Proof of God’s presence in heaven” written 09/09/2020 3rd place win Joseph May’s Pyramid Contest First syllable in capitals and is title Total 7 lines with 1,2,3,5,6,7,8 syllables

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Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2020 2:50:00 PM

Wonderful write Krish, Congrats on your win..

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/20/2020 7:37:00 PM

Thank you for my placement and for a very interesting contest. kind regards krish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 2:03:00 PM

I enjoyed your take on the glorious sun. The picture was so nice too. Congrats.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/20/2020 7:36:00 PM

Thanks Andrea! The Sunset is from near Memphis! Thanks for visiting. Bw

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2020 11:50:00 AM

- I have a panoramic view of the sunset ... and love to see it ... just as beautiful every time - Congratulations on your win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/20/2020 11:53:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise! Pleased! Thanks for your support!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/20/2020 11:22:00 AM

Nicely penned Krish! and a lovely picture to shine next to it. :D Jeanne

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/20/2020 11:44:00 AM

Dear Jeanne Never tired of watching Sun rise or sun set! grew up over looking a sea! So early mornings walk to the beach- just to watch the sun rise from the raging sea!!

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/9/2020 5:41:00 AM

Good form and message, Krish. Best of luck for a contest placement.

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/9/2020 6:59:00 AM

Thanks Jenna! May the Sunshine!!:)