Krish Radhakrishna Poet Verse

Notes About The Poem

Sun

SUN
our star
source of life

gold crimson glory
rivers ripple its rays
birds beast trees happily cheer
“Proof of God’s presence in heaven”

written 09/09/2020
3rd place win
Joseph May’s Pyramid Contest
First syllable in capitals and is title
Total 7 lines with 1,2,3,5,6,7,8 syllables

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Joseph May September 20, 2020 at 2:50 PM Wonderful write Krish, Congrats on your win.. Krish Radhakrishna September 20, 2020 at 7:37 PM Thank you for my placement and for a very interesting contest. kind regards krish

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 2:03 PM I enjoyed your take on the glorious sun. The picture was so nice too. Congrats. Krish Radhakrishna September 20, 2020 at 7:36 PM Thanks Andrea! The Sunset is from near Memphis! Thanks for visiting. Bw

Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2020 at 11:50 AM - I have a panoramic view of the sunset ... and love to see it ... just as beautiful every time - Congratulations on your win, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna September 20, 2020 at 11:53 AM Thanks Anne-Lise! Pleased! Thanks for your support!

Jeanne Mcgee September 20, 2020 at 11:22 AM Nicely penned Krish! and a lovely picture to shine next to it. :D Jeanne Krish Radhakrishna September 20, 2020 at 11:44 AM Dear Jeanne Never tired of watching Sun rise or sun set! grew up over looking a sea! So early mornings walk to the beach- just to watch the sun rise from the raging sea!!

Jenna Logan September 9, 2020 at 5:41 AM Good form and message, Krish. Best of luck for a contest placement. Krish Radhakrishna September 9, 2020 at 6:59 AM Thanks Jenna! May the Sunshine!!:)