Sun

rising sun
melts frost in spring....
warm breath condenses

naturehaiku

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Darlene De Beaulieu

April 16, 2018 at 5:37 PM

Hello Sara, is it Spring where you are? Well not where I am. Spring stayed a short while, then left. Winter is here awhile longer. have a nice evening my friend.

FJ Thomas

March 21, 2018 at 8:07 PM

Beautifully shared Sara :)

Sara Kendrick

March 22, 2018 at 5:10 PM

SP, Thanks for the visit to my page. Your comments are awesome. Sara

Jan Allison

March 19, 2018 at 5:50 PM

beautiful spring imagery sara:-) hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

March 19, 2018 at 6:16 PM

Jan, Thanks for the kind review. Spring is suppose to be here so the season of uncertainty as far as if it will be warm or hot this day plus the chance of showers or storms and the uncertainty of if there will be tornadoes in this one. Sara

Eve Roper

March 19, 2018 at 12:30 AM

and new birth a beautiful Haiku, Sara, they are still very hard for me to write..

Sara Kendrick

March 19, 2018 at 5:13 PM

Eve, Yes, even though short Haiku are not so easy to write. Keep at it. Sometimes one can see something or hear something that gives a line for the start or the whole idea of one to write just keep on trying. Sara..Thanks for the visit to my page.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 15, 2018 at 2:51 PM

- Longing for warmer days - Lovely written, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

March 16, 2018 at 8:18 AM

It warmed up last night here in the mid-forties with the prospect of rain today. I think colder temperatures will follow the rain but only night time temps will be bad with the days warming up into the seventies. Thanks for the kind review. Sara