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Summons the Breeze

Intrepid pines dance
Wheeling their scent across the orchard
Discretely nurturing hope

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Date: 12/14/2009 6:49:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for an uplifting poem. Hope is a gift. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your prayers. Karen

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/16/2009 7:17:00 PM

Goregeous Haiku! I can smell the scents filling the air as I read this wonderful piece. Thank you for your kind comments, always appreciated.

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/16/2009 7:08:00 AM

Heavenly. I can smell it in the breeze! Amazing work with all these lovely haiku! Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/16/2009 3:56:00 AM

LOVE pine trees and theirt potent scent. beautiful haiuku, laura, love, Kristin

Brian Strand

Date: 5/16/2009 12:49:00 AM

Beutiful words Laura.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcom comments

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2009 7:19:00 PM

The scent of the pines is one that fills the air here in North Florida. And I love the way you have the pines dance "Discretely nurtuting hope." Evergreens have that affect, don't they? Never losing their color, always smelling fresh and vibrant. It's almost like they defy death. This was a great, uplifting read, Laura! Love, Carolyn

P Sheart

Date: 5/15/2009 6:57:00 PM

Hi Laura A oh so beautiful haiku! I know just what you mean....Love the thought of the pines wheeling their oh soooo beautiful scent. Love Light Truth Patricia

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/15/2009 4:47:00 PM

I want to take a deep breath while reading this poem! ~ Lovely, ~ Carrie

John Rhinem

Date: 5/15/2009 3:36:00 PM

Smile~I see that this is "Your" Haiku day today dear lady....And what a very beautiful one this is indeed!!!:):)~"Intrepid pines dance....Discretely nurturing hope."~Never lose "Your" hope "Precious & Priceless Laura Mckenzie;" for I find a lot of true beauty, inside of "Your Endless Heart & Soul!!!":):)~Excellent Write Laura!!!~Time for one more I believe...."Love To You & Yours Always & Forever, John!!!":):)~On we go....