Summertime Fun - On the Beach

Summertime Fun – On the Beach
When I’m feeling hot, hot, hot, the beach is certainly my ideal fun spot! Wearing sunglasses and floppy hat plopped on my head, I’m lunging under an umbrella in my bathing suit so red. As I play with my bare feet in the warm sand, for me summertime on the beach is always grand!
After a few sun-drenched laps in the salty ocean, I’m ready for a full-body massage with baby oil or suntan lotion. Feeling very relaxed, sipping on a frosty virgin pina colada, this is definitely summertime fun for Pandita! Just imagine coconut trees swaying in a light breeze, that’s a picture I like – so freeze frame – please!
05-29-2015 Contest: Summertime Fun Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi Placement: HM
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Burman Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 11:27 AM
beautifully penned Pandita.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 7:11 AM
Thank you so very much, my dear! I am happy you enjoyed this piece! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Hi Pandita, just returning to extend my congratulations on another fine win! Kika
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June 14, 2015 at 9:02 AM
Many thanks, Kika, for swinging back with your congrats which I always appreciate! Pandita
Nunez Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 7:48 PM
Hi Pandita. Dropped back to properly congratulate you on your win! Didn't know there was already a result when I commented on this poem. I really like the upbeat tone and the fun way you wrote this. :-) Kim
Sietesantos Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Oh, thank you so very much, Kim! I appreciate your kind congratulations and encouragement! Have a lovely day! Pandita
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June 2, 2015 at 12:09 AM
Pandita, congratulations on your awesome summer time win. ~SKAT~
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June 2, 2015 at 5:44 PM
Many thanks, SKAT A for the great compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita.
Nunez Avatar
June 1, 2015 at 11:39 AM
It's fun! Can see the picture in my mind. Just lovely...as the words that painted it. Good luck for the contest!
Sietesantos Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Hi Kim, thank you so much for the congratulations - glad you liked it! Warmest regards. Pandita
Callus Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 7:51 AM
This is a delightful picture you paint, Pandita. I'm sure many are jealous of your beach fun! Here in Malta the weather is lovely, the temperature rising, and people are swimming. I'll be swimming from now till early November. All the best. // paul
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June 1, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Thank you so much my dear, Paul! WOW Malta sounds like where the beach action is and that's where we should all be!! Sounds lovely to me. Best wishes. Pandita.
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May 30, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Wow I loved this, have I told you I am a masseuse? LOL
Sietesantos Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Many thanks, dear Arthur for kindly complimenting my work. As usual I appreciate your visit! And I know whom to call on when I need a good massage! LOL! Hope you are having an enjoyable weekend! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 11:56 AM
That's also my idea of summertime fun - enjoying the beach. Great imagery - love it!
Sietesantos Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:46 PM
Hi Kika, I always appreciative of your kind comments. Many thanks. Pandita
Ward Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 1:33 AM
A fun poem sure to do well in the contest. Julia, :)
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May 29, 2015 at 3:45 PM
My dear Julia, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a lovely comment! Pandita
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