Summertime

waves loving the shore
summer on the sandy beach
seashells galore


throw the bread up high
seagulls flying overhead
catch one if you can


Date Written: 6/23/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Thomas Avatar
June 23, 2022 at 10:47 AM
I have seen pictures of them on beaches in large numbers. Now I know why!
Thomas Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 1:24 PM
I hope to see it in person one day :)
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Thanks for your note. The real thing is much better than any picture or painting. You miss the smell and hearing it. I love the beach and really miss it. Oh Well. Enjoy your day writing away....................
Krutsinger Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 5:36 AM
This one lands me on the beach; I can smell the ocean.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 10:53 AM
Thanks for your note. I am with you. Let's hit the beach???? Enjoy your day................
Wolf Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 1:07 PM
'waves loving the shore...seashells galore' beautifully penned and rhyme, Paula. Two thumbs way up! Smiles, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
June 25, 2020 at 2:35 PM
Thanks for your note, two thumbs way up and smiles. Glad you like it. I love the beach. Have a great day.......................
Cunningham Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 6:54 PM
Those gulls don't miss a trick Paula. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 10:38 AM
Thank You, for your note and good luck. Have a day with blessings......
Rodrigues Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 6:17 PM
I can see the gulls circling!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 10:37 AM
Thank You, for your note. Yes, the birds are out. Enjoy your summer and day..........
Kauffman Avatar
June 23, 2020 at 6:02 PM
Absolutely delightful, my friend. You have captured the freedom and fun in the sun of summer! Good luck in the contest. Blessings!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2020 at 10:36 AM
Thank You, for your note, kind words and good luck. Have a wonderful day with blessings......
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