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Summer-Tameless

summer-tameless

cool wetness made wild
steady heaves pallid filed heads ~~
white horses edged sea

2021 June 28
*2nd Place*
Summer Haiku
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2021 July 03

imagerymetaphorseahaiku

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Sam Kauffman

July 5, 2021 at 9:29 AM

Back with Ho'omaikai' 'ana (hope I said that correctly) William. I love the imagery. Also love the black lava beaches! Aloha hoaloha!

William Kelii Kekaula

July 5, 2021 at 10:04 AM

I appreciate your return and generous expressions, Sam, if you replace the 'H' with a 'P', it would mean 'Blessings' ka'u hoaaloha, Aloha!

Beata Agustin

July 5, 2021 at 6:17 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

William Kelii Kekaula

July 5, 2021 at 9:27 AM

Thanks, Beata, I appreciate you my friend, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 4, 2021 at 12:12 PM

- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)

William Kelii Kekaula

July 4, 2021 at 12:18 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise, tho' not much snow in Hawaii, we do melt my friend, Aloha!

Kim Merryman

July 3, 2021 at 8:04 PM

William, congrats on your win with this creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M

William Kelii Kekaula

July 3, 2021 at 8:33 PM

Always a joy, Kim, reading your words of comfort my friend, Aloha!

Tania Kitchin

July 3, 2021 at 1:22 PM

William, congratulations on your winning placement, love the imagery and movement in this one!

William Kelii Kekaula

July 3, 2021 at 2:54 PM

White steeds on our volcanic black beaches as surging waves in contrast. Thank you, Tania, for the wondrous opportunity my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2021 at 10:10 AM

cool imagery, William. BIG congrats

William Kelii Kekaula

July 3, 2021 at 12:54 PM

Thanks, Andrea, as to you and your wondrous squirrel -- mongooses in Hawaii, Aloha my friend!

Christuraj Alex

July 3, 2021 at 9:54 AM

Beautiful. Congratulations!

William Kelii Kekaula

July 3, 2021 at 12:50 PM

Thank you, Christuraj, as to you as well for your peakish efforts my friend, Aloha!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

July 3, 2021 at 6:22 AM

I can almost hear this piece. I have not seen the ocean in way too long. Gorgeous penning, congratulations on your win! xomo

William Kelii Kekaula

July 3, 2021 at 12:42 PM

Waves galloping like white steeds coming ashore. A hearty thanks, Mo, as to you as well for your heroine efforts that were nicely done my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

June 28, 2021 at 4:25 PM

Very cool William! The image of sea foam left on the shore as "white horses." Enjoyed this so much. Aloha. Mahalo for sharing hoaloha!

William Kelii Kekaula

June 28, 2021 at 5:13 PM

On my side of the island, great contrast between our volcanic black beaches and cresting waves. Thanks, Sam, for your mana'o (opinion/sharing), Aloha!

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