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Summer's Wind

Tranquil breeze Ruffle sunlit dappled leaves In a frenzied dance Of sparkling morning dewdrops

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/3/2008 12:26:00 PM
A superbly written poem, with pastel colors and bright tone. Poem possesses imagery, clarity and simplicity. This poem sings with resonance. Indeed, this poem takes you on a journey. I can feel the "Summer's Wind" too.Still, words have so much power in them. Keep telling the truth, with paper and pen. Words do not die. Keep sharing
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Date: 8/3/2008 11:23:00 AM
Very nice I love the feel of this write good imagery!Laura
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Date: 8/3/2008 9:51:00 AM
Oooo, this is awesome! What a great visual as I see it for myself right now, out my backdoor...perfect. Well done, Love Kristin
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