Summer's Wind

Tranquil breeze 
Ruffle sunlit dappled leaves
In a frenzied dance
Of sparkling morning dewdrops
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Golden Avatar
August 3, 2008 at 12:26 PM
A superbly written poem, with pastel colors and bright tone. Poem possesses imagery, clarity and simplicity. This poem sings with resonance. Indeed, this poem takes you on a journey. I can feel the "Summer's Wind" too.Still, words have so much power in them. Keep telling the truth, with paper and pen. Words do not die. Keep sharing
Mckenzie Avatar
August 3, 2008 at 11:23 AM
Very nice I love the feel of this write good imagery!Laura
Reynolds Avatar
August 3, 2008 at 9:51 AM
Oooo, this is awesome! What a great visual as I see it for myself right now, out my backdoor...perfect. Well done, Love Kristin
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