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Summers Surcease Senryu

                          Summer’s Surcease Senryu

                                      8/1/2023

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                           lawn chairs stored away,
                           bathing suits, no sun will see,
                           birds’ songs, are no more,


                                             

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/3/2023 1:58:00 PM A wonderful write. You told a story in just a few words. I like summer but not this heat. We need rain. Have a wonderful day............. Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 8/3/2023 5:34:00 PM Hope this works, have been trying to reply to you and could not! I wish I could have use more intelligent words. I mean these are clear they’re not high enough level that I would like to write Heat stays in my city for towmoremontgs but I like that. Thank you, Paula

Gershon Wolf Date: 8/2/2023 7:13:00 PM Hold on, dear. I just got those things out, after sleeping through July. Gimme a 15-day extension, please?! .... Seriously, fine penning here, Pangie. You brought that final curtain down hard, I must say! Can I call you 'The Hammer?!' ~ Little Nail Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 8/2/2023 7:19:00 PM Read Paul’s comment.)) Still toasty here, but not burnt toast. The Hammer the Blind hammer )))

Paul Callus Date: 8/2/2023 12:06:00 AM In a few words you manage to close another lovely chapter in life, Pangie. I always loved summer, but each time it came to an end it felt like it betrayed me, leaving me in the lurch right when our relationship was flourishing. Nowadays I don't take it so much to heart...probably age has mellowed me :) ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul Login to Reply Panagiota Romios Date: 8/2/2023 4:21:00 AM Paul,I am always honored by your visits. Aging gives one more perspective and vision, yoy used the right Term, mellowing…..It’s only 5 months till New Years Day!! Enjoy and relish life, one day at a time.. summer weather goes on here for almost two full months, yet compared to the Midwest?Thank you for you words about the poem, In friendship , Pangie