Summer's Interlude: Sg

Summer's breeze ruffles my hair
while pale moonlight glows
and waves kiss the sandy shore
as the calm tide flows.
A Whippoorwill fills
the night with rhythmical songs
in sweet throaty trills.



June 19, 2021
Seguidilla Poetry Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Enjoy your win/Sunday with blessings...................
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 10:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win with this wonderful poem. Great imagery!
Alex Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 8:41 PM
Beautiful creation. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 8:02 PM
Delightful read, Jenna, congrats on your win! Beautiful pic too
Agustin Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 6:34 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, delightful and delighting all throughout. God bless you.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 9, 2021 at 4:41 PM
Graceful flows to their conclusive periods, Jenna, imagery defined in words my friend, with a girl in the water that looks like you, thank you for your participation and your honorable placement my friend, Aloha!
Mcintosh Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Beautifully done. I love it and hope you're a winner. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Allison Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 12:00 PM
what soothing imagery I love the name whippoorwills it is so wonderful a word and great to use in your wonderful poetry:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
June 20, 2021 at 3:46 AM
The name, 'whippoorwill' seems very delicate. Almost like it should be whispered. Thanks for liking this one, Jan.
Balasubramanian Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 7:14 AM
Great imagery. Enjoyed reading.
Logan Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 8:13 AM
Thanks so much, Rama.
Cunningham Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 6:10 AM
You've given us a tranquil summer scene Jenna, with the soothing sound of birdsong. Best of luck and enjoy your day. Tom
Logan Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 8:13 AM
lol I wrote some ONE not some wine, but if you're bringing a bottle, make it rose'
Cunningham Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Lol,red or white ?
Logan Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 6:56 AM
It sounds like a lovely Summer's night, but she needs someone with whom to share it. wink...Thanks so much, Tom.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Cute and picturesque. Never heard of that bird. Had to search for it. Best for a win.
Logan Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Thanks, Victor. I don't count on anything as a winner, but I appreciate your encouragement.
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