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Summer's Garden Visual 7

This summer, garden's flowers, lure me to come, drink in beauty Shady tree, a bench to rest, enjoy the view, as clouds present Rest and dream, before the storm blows, rain to water, summer's rose
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest: Glorious Sijo Fields Written: January 29, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Lovely, Sara.. congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Sara, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT
May Avatar
February 13, 2015 at 9:13 PM
Wonderful write Sara...Congrats on your win
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 1:46 AM
Such a beauty Sara! Congrats on ur wonderful win!
Allison Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
Lamoureux Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 8:49 AM
One of the best Sara! Congratulations.
Callus Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 7:36 AM
Lovely take on this beautiful visual, Sara! Natural serene surroundings captivate the imagination. Congratulations on your fine win. All the best. // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 1:02 AM
oh, Sara, I think you even chose a better picture of the bench than I had used . I really loved that last line. it as so lyrical and the inner rhyme of blows with rose. Congrats in my contest.
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 11:35 AM
Rest and dream, before the storm blows, rain to water, summer's rose soo charming Sara. Love>rajat
Horne Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 4:16 PM
love this one, Sara - a big winner for sure
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 3:22 PM
A delight to my senses - stunning imagery - good luck in the contest Sara:-) Hugs jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:33 PM
because you enchant me with your word-scenes, sara... beautiful.. i haven't seen this contest yet but this is a winning bet.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:22 PM
- Summer 2014 was a truly wonderful in Norway - thanks for this beautiful poem that gave my thoughts back to the summer - I wish you best of luck in contest, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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