Summer's Fall

As the breeze slows down ,
resting on the ground , 
with the Sun setting , 
and a man simply fretting .

The sky is pink , 
with a splash of yellow , 
with the Summer Sun sink , 
The Summer is mellow .

The birds on their nests , 
and as the wind rests , 
I sit on my desk , 
and think what to do next ! 

With the sky pink and yellow , 
the atmosphere is mellow , 
the horizon sets far off , 
Its finally Summer's fall ! 

-Saanvi Dua

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/8/2013 8:06:00 PM
Saanvi, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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Date: 12/2/2013 8:52:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Saanvi
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Date: 12/2/2013 5:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Saanvi !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2013 11:09:00 AM
Great imagery enjoyed very much.
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Date: 10/7/2013 9:05:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comment on my recent poem. You are very talented. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 10/7/2013 10:15:00 AM
Hi Saanvi, A truly nice write from you..I enjoyed reading this one.. Ken
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Date: 10/6/2013 1:05:00 AM
this is really cute putting the word Fall in to the line. truly "fall" Is a choice word to use in place of autumn. For it is the fall of all the good warmth of summer!
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Date: 10/6/2013 9:09:00 AM
THANKS FOR STOPPING BY ! DO ASK THE WIND FOR A RIDE !
Date: 10/6/2013 12:19:00 AM
This poem you've penned is so awesome my very dear friend Saanvi. I love the feeling & the very wonderful image. A great write indeed which I enjoyed so much this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing this precious gem of yours. You write so well. I'll try my best to read more of your poem soon ok. By the way, thank you so much for your very lovely greetings on my birthday! More blessings to u! love lots & big hugs, Leonora
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 10/6/2013 9:09:00 AM
THANKS LEONARA ! DO ASK THE WIND FOR A RIDE !!!! :P
Date: 10/5/2013 12:03:00 PM
Beautiful summer here you describe...good work friend.
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 10/6/2013 6:34:00 AM
THANKS FOR THE SWEET VISIT AND COMMENT ! DO ASK THE WIND FOR A RIDE !
Date: 10/5/2013 6:09:00 AM
Good morning from my side of the world. Thanks for the very soft glow and Ode to the end of summer days imagery. Saanvi, a wonderful way in resting the summer ray. such a pretty write, tap away on that desk... Fall is such an up coming delightful season to write about. enjoy your day...linda
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 10/5/2013 6:11:00 AM
Thanks for the sweet visit and comment ! do ask for the wind to give you a ride !
Date: 10/5/2013 6:04:00 AM
- A season to beautiful sight. - Beautiful poem Saanvi ! - Wishing you a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:11:00 AM
Thanks for the sweet visit and comment ! Do ask the wind to give you a ride !
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