Summer's Fall

As the breeze slows down ,
resting on the ground , 
with the Sun setting , 
and a man simply fretting .

The sky is pink , 
with a splash of yellow , 
with the Summer Sun sink , 
The Summer is mellow .

The birds on their nests , 
and as the wind rests , 
I sit on my desk , 
and think what to do next ! 

With the sky pink and yellow , 
the atmosphere is mellow , 
the horizon sets far off , 
Its finally Summer's fall ! 

-Saanvi Dua
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 8, 2013 at 8:06 PM
Saanvi, , Congratulations on 'Your own favorite poem contest." I truly miss reading and scanning poems from the winning contest list. Hope you are well! Always & Forever * Linda
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December 2, 2013 at 8:52 AM
Congrats on the win, Saanvi
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December 2, 2013 at 5:42 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A favorite poem of yours! -by Giorgio V. - A clear favorite poem! - Well done, Saanvi !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 16, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Great imagery enjoyed very much.
Michelle Avatar
October 7, 2013 at 9:05 PM
Thank you for your kind comment on my recent poem. You are very talented. Love, Juli-Michelle
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October 7, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Hi Saanvi, A truly nice write from you..I enjoyed reading this one.. Ken
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October 6, 2013 at 1:05 AM
this is really cute putting the word Fall in to the line. truly "fall" Is a choice word to use in place of autumn. For it is the fall of all the good warmth of summer!
Dua Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 9:09 AM
THANKS FOR STOPPING BY ! DO ASK THE WIND FOR A RIDE !
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October 6, 2013 at 12:19 AM
This poem you've penned is so awesome my very dear friend Saanvi. I love the feeling & the very wonderful image. A great write indeed which I enjoyed so much this afternoon. Thank you so much for sharing this precious gem of yours. You write so well. I'll try my best to read more of your poem soon ok. By the way, thank you so much for your very lovely greetings on my birthday! More blessings to u! love lots & big hugs, Leonora
Dua Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 9:09 AM
THANKS LEONARA ! DO ASK THE WIND FOR A RIDE !!!! :P
Dey Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 12:03 PM
Beautiful summer here you describe...good work friend.
Dua Avatar
October 6, 2013 at 6:34 AM
THANKS FOR THE SWEET VISIT AND COMMENT ! DO ASK THE WIND FOR A RIDE !
A   Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 6:09 AM
Good morning from my side of the world. Thanks for the very soft glow and Ode to the end of summer days imagery. Saanvi, a wonderful way in resting the summer ray. such a pretty write, tap away on that desk... Fall is such an up coming delightful season to write about. enjoy your day...linda
Dua Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 6:11 AM
Thanks for the sweet visit and comment ! do ask for the wind to give you a ride !
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October 5, 2013 at 6:04 AM
- A season to beautiful sight. - Beautiful poem Saanvi ! - Wishing you a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dua Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 6:11 AM
Thanks for the sweet visit and comment ! Do ask the wind to give you a ride !
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