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Summer Vacation

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scorching hot sunshine bronzed bodies bake on the beach barbecue smoke drifts 5,7,5 checked with HMS Summer Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin Submitted to Bite Size Poem no.10 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 06/29/21

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P.M. Richter
Date: 8/3/2021 8:25:00 AM
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I love it -
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 7/3/2021 4:38:00 AM
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Jan, a lovely summer haiku, I don't recall seeing this one in the contest. hugs!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2021 9:37:00 AM
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How odd Tania, I definitely entered it and have an N/A never mind I can use it for another contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2021 10:53:00 AM
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Love this Haiku write. Do you have a place for me on your beach??? Looks like a pretty day. Have a blessed day under your tree writing away.............
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2021 9:37:00 AM
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You are welcome any time Paula:-) hugs Jan xx
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Terry Flood
Date: 6/29/2021 3:40:00 PM
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The first burger’s mine. Fine visualisation, Jan. Guess that means my burger will be charcoaled! ;-) Terry
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2021 9:38:00 AM
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Am not a fan of charcoal/barbecued food black on outside raw in the middle lol:-( hugs jan xx
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 6/29/2021 11:55:00 AM
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Ah, I will bring the refreshers, put another shrimp on the B Q Jan, :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2021 9:38:00 AM
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Thanks Vie:-) hugs jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 6/29/2021 11:36:00 AM
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Yes, smoke drifts like your final line, straight into one's eyes no matter where you stand . . . ..Aloha! Rico
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2021 9:39:00 AM
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Thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2021 11:09:00 AM
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- A wonderful summer adventure, Jan - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/3/2021 9:39:00 AM
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Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 6/29/2021 9:33:00 AM
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Temptingly nice imagery, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/30/2021 3:02:00 PM
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Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 8:42:00 AM
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Nice one, Jan. So clear your image brightened my day. Enjoyed it.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/30/2021 3:02:00 PM
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thanks Milt:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/29/2021 4:10:00 AM
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Stunning summer image Jan, might have to be next year now, sigh. Hope your mouth is okay today. Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/30/2021 3:01:00 PM
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mouth is ok but had migraine and sickness for 24hr am finally back to being able to eat, been a tough couple of days:-( hugs Jan xx
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 6/29/2021 1:40:00 AM
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Love the image it creates, Jan, well written haiku:)
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2021 2:58:00 AM
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thanks Jo I keep changing the final line lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 6/29/2021 12:52:00 AM
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Plenty of them in summer. Lovely haiku.
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/29/2021 2:57:00 AM
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thanks Victor, not us this year we are going no where!:-) hugs Jan xx

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