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scorching hot sunshine bronzed bodies bake on the beach barbecue smoke drifts 5,7,5 checked with HMS Summer Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin Submitted to Bite Size Poem no.10 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier 06/29/21

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Date: 8/3/2021 8:25:00 AM
I love it -
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Date: 7/10/2021 1:56:00 PM
Lovely as are you!
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Date: 7/3/2021 4:38:00 AM
Jan, a lovely summer haiku, I don't recall seeing this one in the contest. hugs!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/3/2021 9:37:00 AM
How odd Tania, I definitely entered it and have an N/A never mind I can use it for another contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/1/2021 10:44:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait for the summer (winter here at the moment). There is nothing like sun, sea, and barbeque to lift my spirits. Hugs, Suzette
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Suz, we are not beach people but I do love walking near the sea:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/30/2021 10:53:00 AM
Love this Haiku write. Do you have a place for me on your beach??? Looks like a pretty day. Have a blessed day under your tree writing away.............
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:37:00 AM
You are welcome any time Paula:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 3:40:00 PM
The first burger’s mine. Fine visualisation, Jan. Guess that means my burger will be charcoaled! ;-) Terry
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:38:00 AM
Am not a fan of charcoal/barbecued food black on outside raw in the middle lol:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 11:55:00 AM
Ah, I will bring the refreshers, put another shrimp on the B Q Jan, :)
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Vie:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 11:36:00 AM
Yes, smoke drifts like your final line, straight into one's eyes no matter where you stand . . . ..Aloha! Rico
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 11:09:00 AM
- A wonderful summer adventure, Jan - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 9:33:00 AM
Temptingly nice imagery, Jan.
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Date: 6/30/2021 3:02:00 PM
Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 8:42:00 AM
Nice one, Jan. So clear your image brightened my day. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 6/30/2021 3:02:00 PM
thanks Milt:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 4:10:00 AM
Stunning summer image Jan, might have to be next year now, sigh. Hope your mouth is okay today. Tom
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Date: 6/30/2021 3:01:00 PM
mouth is ok but had migraine and sickness for 24hr am finally back to being able to eat, been a tough couple of days:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 1:40:00 AM
Love the image it creates, Jan, well written haiku:)
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:58:00 AM
thanks Jo I keep changing the final line lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/29/2021 12:52:00 AM
Plenty of them in summer. Lovely haiku.
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Date: 6/29/2021 2:57:00 AM
thanks Victor, not us this year we are going no where!:-) hugs Jan xx