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Summer Trek

mountain crest beckons as pine trees waft warm zephyr trail ushers uphill... ...basking midst sunlight devoid of face shield and mask my soul thanks* the Lord.**
*Psalm 136:1 "O give thanks unto the LORD; for he is good: for his mercy endureth for ever." (**This second stanza was added on July 5, 2021 after contest was judged.) June 29, 2021 3rd place, "Summer Haiku" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 7/3/2021.

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Date: 7/8/2021 6:46:00 AM
Very well penned, Beata. I especially like the line "...as pine trees waft warm zephyr." Superb! Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 7/6/2021 11:47:00 AM
well done, Beata ~
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Date: 7/6/2021 10:02:00 AM
Beata, what a beautiful picture of gratitude recognizing the ways God showers us with good things and gifts. Just a lovely haiku - congratulations on your win! Blessings of sunlight and warm zephrys to you!
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Date: 7/4/2021 12:11:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/3/2021 8:14:00 PM
A lovely haiku, Beata! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/3/2021 1:28:00 PM
Beata, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku!
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Date: 7/3/2021 10:12:00 AM
oh, you did Trek and I did Walk. I love yours, Beata. Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:57:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/29/2021 7:29:00 PM
beautiful scenery painted through your words! hugs
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