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Summer Time

longs days stretch awake abundance a garden sight birds and bees gather adorn rose perfume mown grass smells of warm sunshine summer melts on tongues 6-23-2020 Summer Haiku's Poetry Contest 1st place

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/1/2020 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations Jeanne Love this~~~~ Panagiota xx

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/30/2020 2:52:00 PM

Such a vibrant, colourful, scented haiku Jeanne! Congratulations on your win. Blessings and lots of love :)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/29/2020 3:02:00 PM

A great Haiku. Congratulations on your win. This is well deserved.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 4:16:00 PM

So kind of you. Thanks for reading my poetry and giving me comments. Keeps me going to know people like my writing. xoxo

John Watt

Date: 6/29/2020 1:23:00 PM

Jeanne, I do love the smell of newly mown grass (as long as my allergies don't kick in!) Congratulations on your #1 placement in the haiku contest ~ John

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 4:15:00 PM

Good afternoon Mr. John...I have the same problems with the allergies, so in Mexico I have no lawn, but here in Bellingham I have 2 acres of it...now I let 1/2 of it go to tall grass which is so pretty and still get the smell of the cut lawn. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. :D

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/29/2020 12:15:00 PM

Congrats Jeanne on your TOP win--wonderful imagery!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 4:14:00 PM

Hi Vijay...thank you...summer is my favorite time of the year!

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/29/2020 11:48:00 AM

Visually entertaining, Jeanne, well-thought-out pleasantries, my compliments to your 1st Place win -- Aloha~@wk

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 4:13:00 PM

Aloha Kekaula, I hope you are having a pleasant day where you are. And thank you so kindly for your comments. :D

V. Deepa

Date: 6/29/2020 6:16:00 AM

Woah..beautiful imagery. Loved the last line mam:-) Congratulations on your placement. Keep writing.Keep inspiring.:-) Take care.With love~Deepa

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:13:00 AM

thank you Deepa. I love your image you use for your avatar. :D

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/29/2020 1:51:00 AM

summer melts on tongues.. I loved that line.. Beautifully penned.. Congrats Jeanne..

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:14:00 AM

I'm thinking an ice-cream melting on my tongue today would be nice too. Thanks for stopping by to read.

Joseph May

Date: 6/28/2020 8:45:00 PM

Beautiful write Jeanne, Congrats on your win..

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/29/2020 9:14:00 AM

Hi Joseph, thanks so much...

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/28/2020 5:39:00 PM

I always love the smell of mown grass! An Instant Fave! Congrats on your top win!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/28/2020 6:06:00 PM

I love the smell but not always the work to get it, lol. Thanks for the fav!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/28/2020 5:10:00 PM

Magnificent haiku, Jeanne:-) A well-deserved first-place win. Congratulations!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/28/2020 6:05:00 PM

Thank-you so much for your kind words Edward. Hope you are having a lovely Sunday. Jeanne

Jan Allison

Date: 6/28/2020 4:33:00 PM

Such delightful imagery many congratulations on your win Jeanne:-) hugs Jan xx

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/28/2020 6:04:00 PM

Hi Jan, I'm happy you enjoyed a bit of cyber summer. :D

Eve Roper

Date: 6/28/2020 4:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jeanne. Hugs Eve

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/28/2020 6:04:00 PM

:D thanks Eve.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/28/2020 3:41:00 PM

Congratulations Jeanne on your first place win, beautifully penned, love the last line!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/28/2020 6:02:00 PM

Thank you so much Tania...it is my favorite line too. What a wonderful muse you gave us.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/28/2020 3:07:00 AM

Delightful imagery, Jeanne...appeals to our senses. Lovely ending "summer melts on tongues" ~ Regards // paul

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/28/2020 6:04:00 PM

My favorite line Paul...and I think Tania liked it too. Thanks for your words. Jeanne

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/24/2020 2:08:00 PM

Very nice to read today. Well written Jeanne :)

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/28/2020 6:03:00 PM

Hi Heidi...I'm so happy it touched you. Thanks for the read too. :D

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/24/2020 12:39:00 PM

Lovely summer images Jeanne, good luck in the contest Tom

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/28/2020 6:02:00 PM

Hi Tom, I think you helped me out with good juju...:D