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Summer Tempest

Swelling thunderhead, An attraction in the sky; Gather of the clouds.

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Tyler Martin

Date: 4/27/2009 10:09:00 PM

Gather of the clouds, what an ending. Your ending are wise. Tyler

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/27/2009 12:53:00 PM

Ok..swelling thunderhead?..my goodness..how long did it take you to come up with that one..LOL..i want it..LOL..this is awesome brother.

Charlene Bird

Date: 4/26/2009 8:28:00 PM

This is just beautiful, love it!

Sammy Shaq

Date: 4/26/2009 7:15:00 PM

Nothing beats a Haiku before sleeping. Loved it. There is a connection, an attraction in the sky... beautiful. Yours Truly, Sami.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/26/2009 2:02:00 PM

thunderhead an attraction in the sky reflecting power and light too-wonderful summer tempest-----charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/26/2009 1:27:00 PM

A very sharp, "tempestuous" image, Raul! When I visited out West, I saw cloud formations that reminded me of the song "Ghost Riders in the Sky." You relate well the images of nature in all your work. Love, Carolyn

Christopher Higgins

Date: 4/26/2009 11:59:00 AM

Another well written haiku from you..well done.