Summer Tempest

Swelling thunderhead,
An attraction in the sky;
Gather of the clouds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:09 PM
Gather of the clouds, what an ending. Your ending are wise. Tyler
Higgins Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Ok..swelling thunderhead?..my goodness..how long did it take you to come up with that one..LOL..i want it..LOL..this is awesome brother.
Bird Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 8:28 PM
This is just beautiful, love it!
Al-Khalili Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 7:15 PM
Nothing beats a Haiku before sleeping. Loved it. There is a connection, an attraction in the sky... beautiful. Yours Truly, Sami.
Chircop Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 2:02 PM
thunderhead an attraction in the sky reflecting power and light too-wonderful summer tempest-----charma
Devonshire Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 1:27 PM
A very sharp, "tempestuous" image, Raul! When I visited out West, I saw cloud formations that reminded me of the song "Ghost Riders in the Sky." You relate well the images of nature in all your work. Love, Carolyn
Higgins Avatar
April 26, 2009 at 11:59 AM
Another well written haiku from you..well done.
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