Summer Sunset

Summer sun dipped itself gradually 
Unclear, pale became the horizon slowly  
Making it feel sad, in the fading light, but
Meeting point of the earth and sky 
Erupted suddenly, with numerous faint glows when
Replete with their twinkles and cool soft lights, the rising moon and  
Stars up there, sprang from nowhere to cheer up the horizon,
Unnerving the spreading darkness, and  
Not letting it take a foothold out there,
Soon turning its sad mood to a joyous and celebrative one
Enchanting the meeting point yonder with holy ambience
To make it look as a betrothal of two newlyweds, under star lights.

Contest: Summer Acrostic
Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Date write: 19.6.2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/20/2014 10:49:00 PM
wowowow, a real beauty. A sure winner in my opinion.
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/21/2014 1:00:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for your encouragement. Mohan
Date: 6/19/2014 10:55:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Mohan ! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/19/2014 9:53:00 PM
Thank you Anne for your valuable support. Mohan
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