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Written 30 July 2025 for 1399 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand.

Summer Sunrise Hiku 43

Summer Sunrise Hiku 43

Golden morn in view
Summer shine kisses the dew~
Nature starts anew.		

                           \        /        /
                   \          d         e         /
                 \     l                              n    /
             _   o                                            /  
           _   g	                                   m     _
                                                                 _
           _   w                                         0    _
                                                             
                 e                                       r     \
              /         i                            n   \  
                     /       v       n     i     \
                            /            \                              

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s –u –m –m –e -r   s -h-i-n-e   k ~I ~s ~s ~e ~s       t .  . .  .  . w ~
                                                                                  . d  .  e .

n ~a ~t ~u ~r ~e   s                            s       a                         w.
                                                                           n        e
                               t                        t
                                        a       r
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Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2025 at 9:13 AM
Congrats on the win I liked how you formed the sun
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July 31, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Wonderful Hiku depicting a stunningly exposed nature, congratulations on your trophy win, dear poet friend
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