Summer Sundae Color

Milk drip slid pooled lake lick languish
Cirus segments slice sour anguish
Berries bowl buried, sandwiched

Split banana smiles skinless raw
Pokes ice topped mountains tongues adore
Indulged inhibition, law

Melt pulp passionfruit volcano
Delish disallows you say no
Seed sea syrup sweet halo

Sundae dips silky mango dice
Cubes correspond smooth cream entice
Twang of mandarin comes twice




      15th January 2021

      Written for Rob Levassuer's Contest
      Seasonal Attention To Detail 
      Syllables  8 - 8 - 7

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/19/2021 7:52:00 PM
Wow, that's some hot twang of mandarin, Ingrid. Must we wait for summer to share that Sundae? ~Eric
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Date: 1/15/2021 6:29:00 AM
Your a very naughty girl Sigrid, or maybe I’m a naughty boy, either way this one is absolutely decadently immersive, attention to detail, only a true connoisseur would know about, best of luck in the contest, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 1/17/2021 6:33:00 AM
I scream no way,
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 1/16/2021 3:09:00 PM
.... No brain freeze for you, Ice cream Irish Gorgeous Boy...
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