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Summer Sun Haiku

summer sun - 

under the vine trellis

mottled shadows

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One haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Line Gauthier
         Placed 2nd
Posted 18th April 2021

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/4/2021 7:23:00 PM

Oh my ! I love everything about this sweet summer poem you have created. As shadows dance upon my skin, the wind plays through my hair. Paul, you paint such vivid images with your words. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2021 3:12:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Brandy :) I am positive I answered your comments days ago, but I have nothing to show for it!!! Blessings & Hugs coming your way, my friend. // paul

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/15/2021 10:43:00 PM

Much lies beneath the light, very much enjoyed my friend!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2021 11:34:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, my friend. Hope you are keeping well and safe. Best regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/12/2021 3:47:00 PM

Hello Paul, i can picture myself sitting under the trellis under the shade. Regards Darlene

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2021 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Darlene. I love sitting under the vine trellis, but never at the wrong time of day when the sun is too hot! Regards // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/9/2021 8:10:00 PM

Your haiku quietly captures sun and shadows so beautifully, Paul. I can picture you sitting beneath the vine trellis with a glass of red. A poem that is full-bodied with dappled imagery yet with room enough to let the imagination roam. A fav! Hope you're keeping well. Warmest wishes and hugs always, my dear friend.. ~Susan

Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2021 11:23:00 AM

Thank you for your insightful comments and the fav, Susan. I have an extra glass of red if you'd like to share :) Hope you are keeping well and safe, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/4/2021 7:09:00 PM

Lovely.... Vivid imagery

Paul Callus
Date: 5/5/2021 11:55:00 AM

Thank you, Paghunda. Regards // paul

John Fleming

Date: 5/1/2021 10:45:00 AM

This is a beautifully crafted Haiku, Paul...conjures up all manner of fleeting images. My warmest regards. :) john P.s stay safe!

Paul Callus
Date: 5/2/2021 1:33:00 PM

Thank you, John. It is good to see you posting again. ~ Best regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 4/27/2021 1:52:00 PM

Lovely Paul. I do love a vine trellis. Mine carries Sweet Peas. Nicely done. Hope it's a winner. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 4/28/2021 5:03:00 AM

Thank you, Judy. My vine trellis is now covered in new leaves; looking forward to several bunches of grapes. Regards & Blessings // paul

Jack Horne

Date: 4/25/2021 7:07:00 AM

i can see this vividly - beautiful. I hope all is well for you in sunny Malta

Paul Callus
Date: 4/25/2021 9:48:00 AM

Thank you for reading and liking, Jack. Despite covid and restrictions I certainly cannot grumble :) Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/22/2021 5:50:00 PM

exquisite imagery Paul, many congrats :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 4/25/2021 9:46:00 AM

Thank you for the lovely comment and congrats, Jan :) Hugs // paul

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/22/2021 11:44:00 AM

Beautiful...

Paul Callus
Date: 4/25/2021 9:41:00 AM

Thank you Alex. I believe this is the first time our paths have crossed! Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/22/2021 10:18:00 AM

Hi Paul, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 4/22/2021 10:36:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis; so lovely of you to return with congrats. Hope you're having a lovely day. Regards // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2021 8:56:00 AM

Great imagery,Paul, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 4/22/2021 10:34:00 AM

Thank you, Eve. I enjoyed your winning entry, too. Hugs // paul

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/22/2021 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" I would love to be under the vine trellis. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Paul Callus
Date: 4/22/2021 10:34:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. Sending blessings to you, too // paul

Silent One

Date: 4/20/2021 3:05:00 PM

You are the master of the short form my friend... So much imagery in only a few words..

Paul Callus
Date: 4/21/2021 11:21:00 AM

Thank you, S-1; you are too kind. Hope you're keeping well. Regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/20/2021 6:42:00 AM

What a beautiful image, Paul. Love it. BW ~ Mala

Paul Callus
Date: 4/21/2021 11:20:00 AM

Thank you, Mala. A pleasure to have you visiting. Regards // paul

Quoth Theraven

Date: 4/19/2021 8:54:00 AM

Paul, The state of a time-lapse in your Haiku. Motionless and vibrant all at once. Can there be a full appreciation of summer without a trellis to split rays into pie-crust shadow(?) -Richard

Paul Callus
Date: 4/21/2021 11:20:00 AM

I love those "pie-crust shadows" Richard, especially when leaves are shed in autumn. Thank you for stopping by, my friend. Regards // paul

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/19/2021 2:54:00 AM

Wonderful ...

Paul Callus
Date: 4/21/2021 11:17:00 AM

Pleased to have you stopping by, Kai....thank you. Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/18/2021 3:42:00 PM

Now, that's a great image! (hope those vine trellises also carry grapes for a snack, while in that partial shade). Great haiku, Paul... plus I learned a new word: mottled.

Paul Callus
Date: 4/21/2021 11:17:00 AM

Thank you for the feedback, Timothy. My vine trellis affords both shade and grapes :) ...and I make wine thanks to it. Yes, 'mottled' might not be used much, but I have several (unpublished) haiku in which I use it. ~ Regards // paul

Judy Ball

Date: 4/18/2021 2:30:00 PM

Love this Paul. My mom used to have a grape arbor which had a place we could sit under. I love sitting under the grape arbor in summer. Lovely It brings back memories. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus
Date: 4/21/2021 11:13:00 AM

Thank you, Judy. We still have vine trellises, and they provide some shade, too. Glad it brought you back some memories. Regards & Blessings // paul