Summer Sun

Golden shards of light, Barrel down the mountainside: Frolicking shadows.

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/4/2015 10:06:00 AM

What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.

David Meade

Date: 12/9/2014 6:23:00 PM

I can see them -- dancing down the slopes, disappearing and then a cloud, more shadows now . . . a delightful haiku.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/9/2014 4:29:00 PM

beautiful imagery lovely haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/9/2014 4:27:00 PM

I can picture this beauty Raul.Awesome!! : ) Charma