Summer Sun

Golden shards of light,
Barrel down the mountainside:
Frolicking shadows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 10:06 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
Meade Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 6:23 PM
I can see them -- dancing down the slopes, disappearing and then a cloud, more shadows now . . . a delightful haiku.
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 4:29 PM
beautiful imagery lovely haiku:-) Hugs Jan xx
Chircop Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 4:27 PM
I can picture this beauty Raul.Awesome!! : ) Charma
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