Summer Sun

Summer is fading.
I will miss the way the sun
paints your skin with light.

lovehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

January 6, 2013 at 3:46 PM

LOVE it, my favorite of the three!

Rollo West

January 6, 2013 at 5:47 PM

Hello my friend, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Toquyen Harrell

January 6, 2013 at 1:41 PM

You always think of something awesome! I love it, Rollo. So enjoyed!

Rollo West

January 6, 2013 at 5:50 PM

Ho Toquyen, thank you so much my friend for stopping by and your comment. Rollo

Jed Denning

January 6, 2013 at 3:32 AM

Your simple image speaks of a deep love making the anticipation of losing it all the more tragic. What a lovely and evocative poem it is.

Rollo West

January 6, 2013 at 11:03 AM

Hi Jed, and thank you for your great comment. Rollo

Richard Lamoureux

January 6, 2013 at 12:36 AM

This is a gorgeous picture you have painted.

Rollo West

January 6, 2013 at 11:02 AM

Thank you so much Richard. Rollo

Russell Sivey

January 5, 2013 at 10:45 PM

This is so very beautiful the way you describe the sun on her skin in the summertime! This is truly wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and harmonious poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, I loved it, Great Work!!

Rollo West

January 5, 2013 at 10:48 PM

Hello my friend and thank you so much for your comment. Rollo

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