Summer Sun

Summer is fading. I will miss the way the sun paints your skin with light.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2013 3:46:00 PM

LOVE it, my favorite of the three!

Rollo West
Date: 1/6/2013 5:47:00 PM

Hello my friend, thank you for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 1/6/2013 1:41:00 PM

You always think of something awesome! I love it, Rollo. So enjoyed!

Rollo West
Date: 1/6/2013 5:50:00 PM

Ho Toquyen, thank you so much my friend for stopping by and your comment. Rollo

Jed Denning

Date: 1/6/2013 3:32:00 AM

Your simple image speaks of a deep love making the anticipation of losing it all the more tragic. What a lovely and evocative poem it is.

Rollo West
Date: 1/6/2013 11:03:00 AM

Hi Jed, and thank you for your great comment. Rollo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/6/2013 12:36:00 AM

This is a gorgeous picture you have painted.

Rollo West
Date: 1/6/2013 11:02:00 AM

Thank you so much Richard. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/5/2013 10:45:00 PM

This is so very beautiful the way you describe the sun on her skin in the summertime! This is truly wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and harmonious poem this evening! What a remarkable piece, I loved it, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 1/5/2013 10:48:00 PM

Hello my friend and thank you so much for your comment. Rollo