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First Place

Summer Haiku X 2 Contest

June 28, 2023

Summer Song

summer hums song blithe
lustrous flowers emerge in
festive abundance 

trees sway gleefully 
pleasing breeze brings aroma
of shadowy past

flowersummerhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

July 14, 2023 at 11:16 AM

a beauty here. Congrats, mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 15, 2023 at 6:57 PM

Thank you, Dear Andrea. Truly appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

July 14, 2023 at 6:24 AM

Nice! Congratulations, Mala!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 15, 2023 at 6:56 PM

Thank you, Kim. Really appreciate your kind comment.

Kim Merryman

July 12, 2023 at 6:10 PM

Lovely images and a hint of mystery! Congrats on your 1st place win, Mala! Blessings, Kim M

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 15, 2023 at 6:56 PM

Thank you, Kim. Truly appreciate your thoughtful comment.

Paula Goldsmith

July 12, 2023 at 11:27 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 15, 2023 at 6:55 PM

Thank you, Dear Paula. Truly appreciate your lovely comment.

Sam Kauffman

July 12, 2023 at 11:09 AM

Dearest Mala, summer's gentle loveliness is captured in the cadence of your haiku as "trees sway" and "summer hums!" The ku is your last line creates a wonderful sense of mystery! Congratulations on your win dear friend. Hugs and much love!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 15, 2023 at 6:54 PM

Dearest Sam, Thank you so much. Your encouraging comment is precious! Glad you liked the Haikus.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 12, 2023 at 9:32 AM

- A lovely picture in your haikus, Mala :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 15, 2023 at 6:52 PM

Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. Appreciate your inspiring comment.

Tania Kitchin

July 12, 2023 at 5:13 AM

Mala, congratulations on your first place win, love the imagery in this one!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

July 12, 2023 at 5:23 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Tania. I feel so honoured with your placement. Participating in your contests, is an opportunity to learn, to improve our craft. Love ~ Mala