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Summer Song

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First Place

Summer Haiku X 2 Contest

June 28, 2023

summer hums song blithe lustrous flowers emerge in festive abundance trees sway gleefully pleasing breeze brings aroma of shadowy past

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2023 11:16:00 AM

a beauty here. Congrats, mala.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2023 6:57:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Andrea. Truly appreciate.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2023 6:24:00 AM

Nice! Congratulations, Mala!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2023 6:56:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Really appreciate your kind comment.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/12/2023 6:10:00 PM

Lovely images and a hint of mystery! Congrats on your 1st place win, Mala! Blessings, Kim M

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2023 6:56:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Truly appreciate your thoughtful comment.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/12/2023 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a blessed day writing away...................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2023 6:55:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Paula. Truly appreciate your lovely comment.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/12/2023 11:09:00 AM

Dearest Mala, summer's gentle loveliness is captured in the cadence of your haiku as "trees sway" and "summer hums!" The ku is your last line creates a wonderful sense of mystery! Congratulations on your win dear friend. Hugs and much love!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2023 6:54:00 PM

Dearest Sam, Thank you so much. Your encouraging comment is precious! Glad you liked the Haikus.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/12/2023 9:32:00 AM

- A lovely picture in your haikus, Mala :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2023 6:52:00 PM

Thank you, Dear Anne-Lise. Appreciate your inspiring comment.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/12/2023 5:13:00 AM

Mala, congratulations on your first place win, love the imagery in this one!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/12/2023 5:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dear Tania. I feel so honoured with your placement. Participating in your contests, is an opportunity to learn, to improve our craft. Love ~ Mala

Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/30/2023 6:20:00 AM

Very nicely penned. I especially liked your final line which conveys a turn - something "shadowy" in summer's chorus. Terrific! Best wishes, Brian

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/30/2023 7:29:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Brian. So delighted to read your comment. Warm wishes ~ Mala

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 6/28/2023 6:34:00 AM

A lovely poem. Well done.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 6/28/2023 6:41:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Jeanette. Truly appreciate your comment.