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Summer Solstice - Alouette

Watch the sun appear
On this Solstice clear
Over Stonehenge monoliths.
Sing the sacred song
Honoring the throng
Of the ancient spirit’s gifts.

Let the sun stand still
As we feel the thrill
Of Midsummer’s energy.
Summer has begun
Now our hearts are one
As we mark in harmony

Power of the sun
That our Solstice's spun,
We gather to celebrate.
Let us be aware
Of the love we share
Where still Druids congregate.


7th place in Rob Carmack's Screwed XIV Contest.
June 4, 2016 It was awarded an N/A : )
Summer Solstice Contest
Sponsor Shadow Hamilton

*Alouette Form: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/alouette.html

The Solstice is a time when the Sun is at the highest (Summer) and the lowest (Winter) yearly altitude as measured from the equator in the Northern Hemisphere. The word “solstice” comes from two Latin words—“sol” (Sun) and “sistere” (standstill) -- indicating that the Sun comes to a stop before reversing its direction.  Along with the Spring and Fall Equinoxes, Solstices have been considered in many world’s traditions as the most spiritually powerful days in a calendar year.  While it marks the astronomical beginning of Summer, in ancient traditions this time period was known as Midsummer and is celebrated throughout the world in very similar ways even today.

In the Northern Hemisphere, the Summer Solstice occurs on the 21st of June, as the Sun leaves the astrological sign of Gemini and enters into Cancer.  This longest day of the year is the day for celebrating the life-giving powers of the Sun, giving gratitude to the joys of life, love and manifesting dreams into reality.
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Haight Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Hi, Connie, congratulations on your placement in the contest for your lovely summer solstice poem. I like the Alouette Form you used and the way the words flow, along with your additional facts! 7 Hugs, Sandra
Kimathi Avatar
July 15, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Congrats Connie, for your awesome placement with this mystical piece!! ;-)
Anish Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 9:51 PM
This is nice, mystical work. What is your habitation theory? You mentioned it in your comment. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Richards Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:44 PM
I love that you took time to explain your beautiful poem. So many of us take for granted the importance of our beginnings, and the root of rituals and traditions. Nicely done!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 7:59 PM
Thank you very much Carrie. ; )
Kapoor Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 4:51 AM
It's a beautiful poem dear friend with lots of impressive works (form of Poetry with feed backs and Photos) which you have done for this Poem. Excellent one Connie. A full 7+ for this beauty of Summer where you have painted the mystic colors leaving a wonderful image in readers mind. I have placed a new Poem today hope you find it interesting. Love and best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:10 AM
Thank you very much Ravindra. So nice to hear from you. ; )
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 1:25 AM
i love the mystique quality of this piece, dear connie... a winner for me.. huggs!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 5:05 AM
Thank you Nette. I appreciate the. ; )
Austin Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Thanks for the mystery. I've always been fascinated by stonehenge and spirits like the Greek Sibyl. Very instructive stuff, dear Connie. Love, daver
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2016 at 12:39 AM
Thank you Daver. I love history and learning too. Thank you. ; )
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 11:33 PM
Connie, did this not win? it is such a good example of that form you want us to do. I need to print out your poem or the description of that form. Still want to try one on summer!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 5:29 AM
No Andrea, it got an N/A. It is not a form for everyone I guess, but I love it. Thanks. ; )
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 10:23 AM
What a joy to read.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Thank you very much Scott. Nice to hear from you. ; )
Canerdy Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Good, creative approach to the topic, Connie. Janice
Andresen Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 2:57 PM
- A great description of the "Power of the sun" - I wish you luck in the contest :) - (fingers are better today, thank you Connie ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 5:38 PM
That is great! We don't realize how much we need our hands until we have a problem using them. I get carpal tunnel in my right hand sometimes so bad I can't use it and it really puts restrictions on what I can do. Have a great night and thank you! ; )
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Ahhh, I see how you did your alouette here! Very clever way to use that form! I need to try one for summer, huh? Maybe i can do it for the fireworks poem!! Connie, I feel kind of sad thinking of Jan Turner who invented this form. She just kind of disappeared from my life!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Mine too Andrea. I miss her as we were very close. I hope she is well. This is one of my favorite forms of hers. If you do write one you can also use it for the PFT June PC. Thanks Andrea. ; )
Callus Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 10:09 AM
A lovely and clever take on this theme, Connie. Also you make good use of the alouette form. // In Malta we are well acquainted with both summer and winter solstice since we have several prehistoric temples. I once went to Mnajdra Temples to watch; they have exact alignments to the rising sun. ~ Regards // paul
Daniel Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Beautiful poetry, Connie:) all the best in the contest:)
Teagan Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 11:37 PM
very awesome poem, Connie! "Summer has begun, Now our hearts are one, As we mark in harmony" I love that!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 1:44 AM
I wanted to make this longer but had that 20 line limit so I couldn't. I appreciate your encouraging words my friend! Thank you. ; )
Medders Tobechi Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 10:18 PM
I really like this,,,,,, good luck in the contest
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 1:42 AM
Thank you very much Janis. I have been reading the awesome entries, I will need it! : )
Godwin Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Love it, one of the best I've read so far. It is a very crisp write and I love the flow, content and upbeat nature of your words. All the best in the contest and every other little thing ... CayCay
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Wow, thank you so much CayCay. It is still early here 4:40 pm. and my granddaughter is still here. I rushed to post this so the contest wouldn't close on me. I appreciate your lovely response and encouragement my friend! Now I can begin reading some poetry. Hugs, Connie : )
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