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Summer Solstice

The grey sky

suddenly awakes....

summer solstice




© kashinath karmakar (26th June 2011)
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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/7/2011 5:44:00 PM

A perfect picture.

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 6/30/2011 4:29:00 PM

I agree with Johnny's comment. I think this is fantastic, writing defines the writer, we all have our OWN unique ability and style...keep doin' how you do! ~Randa

Johnny Sumler

Date: 6/30/2011 1:02:00 PM

Love this little one. Beautiful title! I have had experience with someone making comments that may be unsensitive or negative. I would be offended if someone were to say this is not ok, do this, change that! You can not change or bend someones creativity. You can inspire it. Love your poetic creativity with this little masterpiece!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/27/2011 5:12:00 AM

lovely vibrancy Kash with this Summer solstice piece..my fav time of the whole year.. beautiful words luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/27/2011 4:47:00 AM

ooohah... fascinating and brilliant, kashi! come visit! :)

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/26/2011 5:17:00 PM

So few words with so much meaning.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/26/2011 3:04:00 PM

work on the last line & take off the capital [T] line 1, think when you saw the beauty of this happening what else sensory happened? did a breeze brush your cheek? were there any sounds like Mom's calling kids to play..your line 3 is too intellectual, you need to draw the reader into the scene with something sensory...[title should be line one ---the grey sky]HUGS Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2011 2:45:00 PM

oh, ok,now I see what you meant when you said you were taking it down, you meant editing it!! Like Charolotte says here it is simple but beautiful.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/26/2011 2:18:00 PM

this is beautifully done, simple but highly effective, the summer solstice is a special time...

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/26/2011 10:44:00 AM

Really like this one, Kashinath, of how that "grey sky" wakes up-- gives a lot of hope as well. Nicely done :) and yup, I actually wrote a senryu ;) ok lemme go check out yours I think I saw one in your list

Jack Horne

Date: 6/26/2011 10:33:00 AM

Lovely atmospheric piece, Kash