Summer Solstice

A perfect picture.

I agree with Johnny's comment. I think this is fantastic, writing defines the writer, we all have our OWN unique ability and style...keep doin' how you do! ~Randa

Love this little one. Beautiful title! I have had experience with someone making comments that may be unsensitive or negative. I would be offended if someone were to say this is not ok, do this, change that! You can not change or bend someones creativity. You can inspire it. Love your poetic creativity with this little masterpiece!

lovely vibrancy Kash with this Summer solstice piece..my fav time of the whole year.. beautiful words luv..

ooohah... fascinating and brilliant, kashi! come visit! :)

So few words with so much meaning.

work on the last line & take off the capital [T] line 1, think when you saw the beauty of this happening what else sensory happened? did a breeze brush your cheek? were there any sounds like Mom's calling kids to play..your line 3 is too intellectual, you need to draw the reader into the scene with something sensory...[title should be line one ---the grey sky]HUGS Light & Love

oh, ok,now I see what you meant when you said you were taking it down, you meant editing it!! Like Charolotte says here it is simple but beautiful.

this is beautifully done, simple but highly effective, the summer solstice is a special time...

Really like this one, Kashinath, of how that "grey sky" wakes up-- gives a lot of hope as well. Nicely done :) and yup, I actually wrote a senryu ;) ok lemme go check out yours I think I saw one in your list

Lovely atmospheric piece, Kash

How is the summer in India? kashinath

creative Haiku. thank you for commenting on Wind Coming Through.

oops, forgot to rate!

Kash, I really like this one. Nice cut on the second line. I love summer solstice time, which is one reason why I wrote MY Lady. Quick soupmail.