Summer So Sweet

summer coming in
no to much wind
not to hot
no boiling pot
on the beach 
its cool water on my feet
SUMMER
SO SWEET
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February 23, 2023 at 10:31 PM
Agreeable short poem on summer. However, may need to be careful about spelling and grammar. In lines 2 and 3, I think "to" needs to be written as "too"
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