Pandita Sietesantos Poet Triolet

Summer Sky

Summer Sky

Summer sky splashed with orange bright
as smoldering sun blazes down,
tickling the sea in sheer delight.
Summer sky splashed with orange bright,
polka-dotted with birds in flight,
their dark wings flapping all around.
Summer sky splashed with orange bright
as smoldering sun blazes down.

05-27-2015

Contest:      One Lovely Summer Triolet
Sponsor:     Andrea Dietrich
Placement:  5th

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Kim Merryman June 15, 2015 at 9:34 AM Your words paint a beautiful picture, Pandita! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Pandita Sietesantos June 15, 2015 at 10:03 PM My dear Kim, it is a pleasure to receive your kind compliments. Thank you! Pandita

Kika Ayala June 14, 2015 at 8:53 AM Just swinging back to tell you congratulations on a wonderful well-deserved win! Kika Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2015 at 9:03 AM Oh, thank you so very much, Kika! I appreciate your kind congratulations and encouragement! Have a lovely day! Pandita

Skat A June 13, 2015 at 6:29 PM PANDITA, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-) Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2015 at 8:42 AM Many thanks, dear SKAT A, for your lovely compliments and congratulations which are so supportive of my work! Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus June 13, 2015 at 3:19 PM Your summer sky is an awesome sight, Pandita! A worthy winner indeed! Congratulations! // paul Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2015 at 8:41 AM Paul, I thank you for your wonderful compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Jan Allison June 13, 2015 at 5:43 AM beautiful imagery and alliteration congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2015 at 8:40 AM Jan, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2015 at 1:05 AM this is very pretty, Pandita. It is lacking only an iambic meter! Congrats in my contest. Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2015 at 8:31 AM Hi Andrea, thank you so very much and I am just happy that this piece made it to the winners list! Also thank you for your constructive comments that will help me to improve the next time that I try this form! Warmest regards. Pandita

Alexis Y. June 13, 2015 at 12:59 AM Pandita , Congratulations on your win:) Alexis Pandita Sietesantos June 14, 2015 at 8:25 AM Thank you so very much, Alexis. I really appreciate your kind acknowledgment! Warmest regards. Pandita

Shadow Hamilton June 8, 2015 at 6:46 PM sheer breath taking beauty in words Pandita hugs 7 Pandita Sietesantos June 8, 2015 at 8:54 PM Shadow, thank you so very much for the wonderful compliments and high rating! I am learning from wonderful veteran poets such as yourself! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala May 29, 2015 at 11:38 AM What a beautiful summer sky you painted with this lovely piece! I enjoyed the read! Kika Pandita Sietesantos May 29, 2015 at 3:43 PM My dear Kika, it is always a pleasure to receive your kind comments. Thank you! Pandita