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Summer Sky

Summer Sky Summer sky splashed with orange bright as smoldering sun blazes down, tickling the sea in sheer delight. Summer sky splashed with orange bright, polka-dotted with birds in flight, their dark wings flapping all around. Summer sky splashed with orange bright as smoldering sun blazes down. 05-27-2015 Contest: One Lovely Summer Triolet Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placement: 5th

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Kim Merryman

Date: 6/15/2015 9:34:00 AM

Your words paint a beautiful picture, Pandita! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2015 10:03:00 PM

My dear Kim, it is a pleasure to receive your kind compliments. Thank you! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 6/14/2015 8:53:00 AM

Just swinging back to tell you congratulations on a wonderful well-deserved win! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2015 9:03:00 AM

Oh, thank you so very much, Kika! I appreciate your kind congratulations and encouragement! Have a lovely day! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 6:29:00 PM

PANDITA, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2015 8:42:00 AM

Many thanks, dear SKAT A, for your lovely compliments and congratulations which are so supportive of my work! Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 6/13/2015 3:19:00 PM

Your summer sky is an awesome sight, Pandita! A worthy winner indeed! Congratulations! // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2015 8:41:00 AM

Paul, I thank you for your wonderful compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 5:43:00 AM

beautiful imagery and alliteration congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2015 8:40:00 AM

Jan, thank you so much for your kind congratulations and compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2015 1:05:00 AM

this is very pretty, Pandita. It is lacking only an iambic meter! Congrats in my contest.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2015 8:31:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thank you so very much and I am just happy that this piece made it to the winners list! Also thank you for your constructive comments that will help me to improve the next time that I try this form! Warmest regards. Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/13/2015 12:59:00 AM

Pandita , Congratulations on your win:) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2015 8:25:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Alexis. I really appreciate your kind acknowledgment! Warmest regards. Pandita

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/8/2015 6:46:00 PM

sheer breath taking beauty in words Pandita hugs 7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/8/2015 8:54:00 PM

Shadow, thank you so very much for the wonderful compliments and high rating! I am learning from wonderful veteran poets such as yourself! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 5/29/2015 11:38:00 AM

What a beautiful summer sky you painted with this lovely piece! I enjoyed the read! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/29/2015 3:43:00 PM

My dear Kika, it is always a pleasure to receive your kind comments. Thank you! Pandita