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Summer Sighs

cool breezes tremble
warm, shining days gently fade...
summer sighs good bye

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Wilma Neels

October 20, 2010 at 7:09 AM

Wow, I love the imagery here Steven! Luckily we are awaiting summer this side of the world :) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

October 4, 2010 at 9:26 PM

Lovely depiction of summer ending. A favorite theme I like to write on too! Luv, Andrea

Skat A

September 20, 2010 at 1:25 PM

A WONDERFUL HAIKU. eNJOYED YOUR POEM. I DID NOT SEE THIS ONE IN MY CONTEST. TAKE CARE~SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 1, 2010 at 9:51 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry Steven. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

September 1, 2010 at 8:13 AM

A lovely haiku, Steven! The days grow shorter here in Florida, but it will be months before the "cool breezes tremble." Sort of an almost endless summer. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn