Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

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- Summer Shower -

Summer set the dewy grass

                            Through my castle I pass

                         The sweet scent of the flowers

                        Bare feet dancing in the showers
















08.06.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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When A Fourth Line Helps It To Rhyme! Poetry Contest
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2nd place in the contest

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Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2018 at 10:19 AM Short and so sweet. Congrats on your win. Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2018 at 1:57 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:53 PM Wonderful rhyming write, Sunshine !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’* Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2018 at 4:11 AM - Many thanks Eve, for your friendly congratulations and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock June 13, 2018 at 2:29 PM Need more rain to dance in the shower. Lovely poem. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 2:57 PM - We've had beautiful weather the last four weeks ... and we need some rain now :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus June 13, 2018 at 1:52 PM A pleasure to be back with deserved congratulations, Anne-Lise! Well done:) Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 1:55 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf June 13, 2018 at 10:17 AM A wonderful fourth line, making this a wonderful poem -- written by a wonderful poet! Kudos on your wonderful win! :) Wacky Wolf Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 12:50 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May June 13, 2018 at 10:16 AM Congrats on your win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 12:49 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett June 13, 2018 at 9:39 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Anne-Lise, beautifully written. :)) Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 12:49 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Roy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy June 13, 2018 at 8:42 AM I'm back to say CONGRATS, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 12:48 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands June 13, 2018 at 7:29 AM Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 12:48 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One June 13, 2018 at 7:02 AM Sounds lovely.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 12:47 PM - Many thanks for my place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham June 13, 2018 at 6:58 AM Back with congratulations sunshine. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 12:47 PM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe June 13, 2018 at 5:59 AM Sweet little summer poem; I like the simplicity. Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 7:04 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Swartz June 11, 2018 at 9:21 PM Great imagery. As you pass through your castle and get your feet wet in the rain. We don't get much rain here in the desert so I'm usually walking on hot sand. Wondrful poem Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2018 at 1:39 PM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, James :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick June 11, 2018 at 8:17 AM Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Reads like a good contender..Way to go. We have that dew upon the grass this morning but no raindrops after hours of thunder and lightning going around us last night. Thanks for dropping by.Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2018 at 8:24 AM - It has been very unusually hot for several weeks ... now the weather changes ... I think there will be thunder here too ... I do not like it - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose June 10, 2018 at 11:44 PM You always pick the best photos and write the best poems, nice ensemble dear poetess. Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2018 at 1:44 AM - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment ... many thanks Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire June 10, 2018 at 8:05 PM Delightful and invigorating, Sunshine! Love it. Sure to do well in the contest. Hugs, carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2018 at 1:43 AM - Many thanks, Carolyn :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman June 10, 2018 at 6:18 PM An awesome refreshing verse Ann-Lise; made me smile!~Che :) Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2018 at 1:42 AM - Glad it gave you a smile, Cheryl :) - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Haley Fisher June 10, 2018 at 4:38 PM I really enjoyed your poem. Playful dancing in the rain. Made me smile. Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2018 at 1:41 AM - Glad it gave you a smile, Haley :) - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud June 10, 2018 at 3:23 PM ohh, a joyful dance in the rain, anne.. let's go!... marvelous mood and happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2018 at 1:40 AM - Nette, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy June 10, 2018 at 12:30 PM This is so lovely, Anne-Lise! Janice Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2018 at 1:39 AM - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Evans June 10, 2018 at 12:20 PM The symbolism and brevity of this poem mesh nicely. Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2018 at 12:25 PM - Many thanks, Richard :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus June 9, 2018 at 5:23 PM It would be a real joy to be barefooted dancing in the rain, Anne-Lise! I believe your ideal castle would be a large open field filled with colorful, fragrant flowers! ~ I also love the accompanying picture in which bright yellow takes pride of place. Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2018 at 6:53 AM - I do not want a giant castle, Paul - My dreams are not big .... a tiny, tiny "castle" with a small beautiful quiet garden :))) - But dancing barefoot in the grass is wonderful :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid June 9, 2018 at 2:31 PM it must be fresh warm rain smiling wishing you a blessed weekend dear friend Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2018 at 6:47 AM - Yes, warm summer rain Liam :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi June 9, 2018 at 1:48 PM I must learn how to dance in the rain... Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2018 at 6:45 AM - Easy to dance in the rain, Pashang ... you get the rhythm of the rain :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May June 9, 2018 at 1:12 PM A lovely write Anne..hugs Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2018 at 1:14 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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